And then my soul saw you and it kind of went "Oh there you are. I've been looking for you.”

Farewell, songbird.

bright_ra_MariaI.Chasing after red
silly songbird never knew
where ’twas heading to

‘Hiking with Haiku’ ~ Format: 5-7-5 poetry ~ Haiku #7 ~ Randomly Abstract
Written in response to the daily prompt Brainwave: Show us BRIGHT.

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22 responses

  1. Beautiful Haiku with deep meanings. Lovely <3

    December 30, 2013 at 10:25 pm

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  8. Eeeto!
    Lovely. :3

    December 31, 2013 at 2:34 pm

  9. Thank you for reading my blog- it means so much to me- you really have given me “new hope” and encouragement (much needed) for my writing- loved this entry- will continue to read your blog- I could relate to this entry. I loved not only the words; the visions are so visually appealing. Thank you for finding me- I, in turn; found you :-)

    December 31, 2013 at 9:26 pm

    • You’re welcome, sweet soul. It’s a pleasure to find you and read you. Please keep writing and expressing yourself the way you do!
      And thank you very much for your kind words, glad you liked reading this one. :)
      – Maria.

      December 31, 2013 at 9:34 pm

  10. خُوبصورت نظم
    beautifully expressed
    may u stay blessed in the coming year

    January 1, 2014 at 2:58 pm

    • جزاك اللہ
      Glad you liked it. =)
      Have a wonderful life ahead. Stay blessed(:

      January 2, 2014 at 5:20 pm

  11. Nice… :)

    January 1, 2014 at 10:10 pm

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  15. Nice Haiku… :) Happy New Year.
    – Thanks for dropping by my blog.. :) -

    January 3, 2014 at 12:37 pm

  16. maryamchahine

    Short but sweet : )

    January 20, 2014 at 12:29 am

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