In my heart’s clustered town

I am livin'

I am living.

Some tears rolled down..

In my heart’s clustered town.

They cause movements.

I’m living.

I’m loving.

….~.~.~.~…

They rolled further down

To the center of the town.

They cause commotions

I’m dying.

I’m dead.

.

And yet they traveled more

To the point that made me sore.

They made me live again!

I’m dead.

I’m living.

Β© Copyright: Maria and Moniba

P.S. Thankyou Moniba for the superb additions to my writing.

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79 thoughts on “In my heart’s clustered town

  1. lalarukh1 says:

    wow! This is really beautiful ! Very nicely written….leaves an impact on heart while reading ! Lovely work by both of you guys ! I love you both together πŸ™‚ Stay Blessed always πŸ™‚ xx

  2. Ain Riz says:

    My heart’s clusterred twon… I cant seem to have enough of this. Reading and re reading this beautiful piece.

  3. lalarukh1 says:

    wow this is so lovely ! Very beautiful words….Leave an impact on heart as I read it ….. You two have done a marvelous jod. Love you guys together πŸ™‚ Keep it up ! xx

  4. Sara Motiwala says:

    Hi Randomly abstract!
    Love this beautiful emotional poem. Simply fantastic!!! Great effort by both of you.
    Loads of love. πŸ™‚

  5. Arindam Saha says:

    They have now traveled miles
    Got absorbed and emerged as smiles
    They now become the carriers of joy
    I’m happy
    I’m alive

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    A small and late addition πŸ™‚

  6. Arindam Saha says:

    And as I now read the conversation between you and lala… What exactly is/was happening in Karachi? I have also heard of such ‘Karachi Burning’ stories mostly on discussions on Pakistani news channels (thanks to youtube) but could never get to know the actual problem…

  7. miss.mysterious says:

    Waaaw! ^_^
    My fav part

    To the point that made me sore.
    They made me live again!
    I’m dead.
    I’m living.

    WOW~

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