By the roaring waves!, Poems and poetry

In my heart’s clustered town

I am livin'

I am living.

Some tears rolled down..

In my heart’s clustered town.

They cause movements.

I’m living.

I’m loving.


They rolled further down

To the center of the town.

They cause commotions

I’m dying.

Iโ€™m dead.


And yet they traveled more

To the point that made me sore.

They made me live again!

I’m dead.

I’m living.

ยฉ Copyright: Maria and Moniba

P.S. Thankyou Moniba for the superb additions to my writing.


79 thoughts on “In my heart’s clustered town

  1. wow! This is really beautiful ! Very nicely written….leaves an impact on heart while reading ! Lovely work by both of you guys ! I love you both together ๐Ÿ™‚ Stay Blessed always ๐Ÿ™‚ xx

  2. Ain Riz says:

    My heart’s clusterred twon… I cant seem to have enough of this. Reading and re reading this beautiful piece.

  3. wow this is so lovely ! Very beautiful words….Leave an impact on heart as I read it ….. You two have done a marvelous jod. Love you guys together ๐Ÿ™‚ Keep it up ! xx

  4. Sara Motiwala says:

    Hi Randomly abstract!
    Love this beautiful emotional poem. Simply fantastic!!! Great effort by both of you.
    Loads of love. ๐Ÿ™‚

  5. They have now traveled miles
    Got absorbed and emerged as smiles
    They now become the carriers of joy
    I’m happy
    I’m alive


    A small and late addition ๐Ÿ™‚

  6. And as I now read the conversation between you and lala… What exactly is/was happening in Karachi? I have also heard of such ‘Karachi Burning’ stories mostly on discussions on Pakistani news channels (thanks to youtube) but could never get to know the actual problem…

  7. miss.mysterious says:

    Waaaw! ^_^
    My fav part

    To the point that made me sore.
    They made me live again!
    Iโ€™m dead.
    Iโ€™m living.


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