I am living.
Some tears rolled down..
In my heart’s clustered town.
They cause movements.
I’m living.
I’m loving.
….~.~.~.~…
They rolled further down
To the center of the town.
They cause commotions
I’m dying.
I’m dead.
.
And yet they traveled more
To the point that made me sore.
They made me live again!
I’m dead.
I’m living.
P.S. Thankyou Moniba for the superb additions to my writing.
Randomly Abstract 
They rolled further down
To the center of the town
They cause commotions
I’m dying
I’m dead
Shucks.
And yet they travelled more
To the point that made me sore
They made me live again
I’m dead
I’m living
My cousin is super-amazing. You left me speechless! You made me publish this thing I wrote for you, and look what you have done! Amazing. Beautiful!
🙂 Hey… You set the pattern! So the credit is all yours. Thanks, btw.
And you added to the beauty! Thankss 🙂
beautiful
Thankyou Ain! 🙂
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A compiled effort by Maria and me.
wow! This is really beautiful ! Very nicely written….leaves an impact on heart while reading ! Lovely work by both of you guys ! I love you both together 🙂 Stay Blessed always 🙂 xx
Thankyou lalarukh! Love you the same 🙂
Love the poem and your site thanks for stopping by to say hello at mine, look forward to the art connection.
Thankyou so very much for your kind words! I am so glad you liked it! 🙂
Keep visiting! And I really love your blog! =)
-Maria
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A beautiful and heart touching poem by a lovely blogger Maria Imran
Woah! Thanks a billion Ain!! 🙂 I’m so honored..
My heart’s clusterred twon… I cant seem to have enough of this. Reading and re reading this beautiful piece.
Thanks a million Ain Riz! You are awesome! And your comment means a lot to me.=)
-Maria.
wow this is so lovely ! Very beautiful words….Leave an impact on heart as I read it ….. You two have done a marvelous jod. Love you guys together 🙂 Keep it up ! xx
Thankyou lalarukh for your amazing words! They leave an impact greater. 😉
Lots of love =)
Love You guys 🙂 *Hugs* xx
Lalarukh we live in the same country! Why can’t we meet and hug? 🙂
Heheh sure sure why not ? You have to come to fsd for this then 😀 I am afraid of Karachi 😛
Afraid of Karachi? Please don’t say that! The city lapse video might help you falling in love with it! 😉
I am sure about it ! But what I hear daily in news makes me sad….and scared too
The ‘scaring’ events happen everywhere! It is up to oneself to understand ‘behind the scene’ stories..
Yeah I know…I love every city of my Pakistan and I pray for it to get better !
I do too! =)
🙂 Every thing will get better inshAllah 🙂 xx
This is so cool. The lil girls I knew have officially turned into poets. Keep making me proud. =D ❤
Wow Somaiya! Shukrya from the bottom of my heart 😉
Your appreciation means a lot- to both of us!
::D
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An awesome work of my awesome friends. Poetry’s got a bright future, guys! 😀
Lol thanks a million for your kind’est’ words! 🙂
You’re welcome girl 😀
Simple, fluid and powerful. Struck some chord with my recent nostalgia.
Thankyou for your striking feedback! Glad you liked it. =)
Sheer brilliancy, Maria and Moniba!
Shukrya Khoulah! So honored by your appreciation! =)
Hi Randomly abstract!
Love this beautiful emotional poem. Simply fantastic!!! Great effort by both of you.
Loads of love. 🙂
Thankyou loads Sara! Your appreciation means a lot!
Love,
Randomly Abstract. 🙂
wow. you write really well ! i loved this poem
Thankyou so much dear Sam. Your appreciation for me is a treasure! 🙂
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I’m seriously baffled by all the feedback here…
Haena? I am surprised too! Five reblogs, can you imagine that? 😉
Wesy when are we writing something again?!
Hahah.. tum start karo. I’ll see if it inspires something in me 😉
Lol lets see. 😉
BEAUTIFUL!!
Brilliantly and beautifully written by Maria And Moniba!
Loved it till the end.
Keep it up!
Thankyou (multiple to hundered times)
Your visit and your appreciation means a whole lot, to both of us! 🙂
Pleased that you liked it!
I love it! Would love to read more so will be looking forwards for future posts 😀
Yaay! Thankyou Sahrish! 🙂
No problem my dear 🙂
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Thankyou for the honor! 🙂
No problem 🙂
Marvelous poem…. Thumbs up 🙂 🙂
Thankyou very much maryam!
On second note, I visited yours and I’m loving it!! 🙂
Thank you so much for that 🙂
=)
WOW! amazing!
Yaay! Thankyou ❤
O Maria! what an awesome line.” I am dead and I am living”
great work author- pierces through the soul.
Thank you Pamela!
This work is a result of collective efforts, by me and my cousin Moniba. 🙂
ok! miss Magnanimous is also honest. This shows!
Loving you more.
Dont blame me if I stalk your blog from now on. 😛
Haha honest I am. 😉
I would LOVE your stalks’ and visits! And there is a surprise coming for you. Stay tuned.
this is extraordinary. the arrangement and content pierce the heart.
Thank you for your feedback! Means a lot. =)
They have now traveled miles
Got absorbed and emerged as smiles
They now become the carriers of joy
I’m happy
I’m alive
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A small and late addition 🙂
And as usual, wonderful. 🙂
Yours too 🙂
And as I now read the conversation between you and lala… What exactly is/was happening in Karachi? I have also heard of such ‘Karachi Burning’ stories mostly on discussions on Pakistani news channels (thanks to youtube) but could never get to know the actual problem…
Nothing as such, currently. Those ‘times of terror’ come and go. .
OK… I get it…
Just read this. This is so beautiful :’O
Thank you so much! =)) Bohat khushi hui apko pasand aya =’D
Jee. Mujhe bhi bohat khushi hui parh ker. ^_^
Pyaari beti. =3
Waaaw! ^_^
My fav part
To the point that made me sore.
They made me live again!
I’m dead.
I’m living.
WOW~
Wrote that with a cousin. Glad you like :’)