Crying and wiping tears together
which wet my pillow tonight
I try not to
think of you,
But it seems
Impossible.
Your thought and
my memories,
they seem to have
trapped me.
I can think of nothing anymore.
And I realize,
It’s useless
to try.
Especially,
when I don’t want to
forget you, or not think of you.
Because I love you to,
think of you!
– Maria.
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It’s hard to resist love. It does bring tears but it also brings joy beyond comparison. Beautiful post.
Such beautiful words, and its so true too, that love brings ‘joy beyond comparison’ as well. Being loved and taken care for, indeed is the most wonderful feeling in the world!
Thankyou for spreading the much-needed positive vibes through your comment.
Best regards. =)
Here here Island Traveller – you said it well.
Hmmm…Memories of the Loved one expressed beautifully through Words.. 🙂
Nice Read Maria.. 🙂
Thankyou!
why do i have to like your posts always! .. you write good!
That’s an honor! Thankyou!
wow Maria…..Never knew you have this side too ! Very lovely words……So relate able ! I use to do the same practice sometimes 🙂 Love is indeed painful but Love allows you to enjoy that pain ! Love it….! xx
Intellectual lines. “Love is indeed painful, but Love allows you to enjoy the pain!”
Thankyou!
And there are more of the kind in my blog! Search search 😛
Oh I will for sure now 😉
You can play very beautifully with the words 🙂 Amazing poem…
Thankyou for your wonderful words! Pleased to have your feedback here. 🙂
You’re poetry is just so appealing, i’m sure it will help me improve mine 🙂 Will keep on reading your stuff in future as well 🙂
Help you in improving yours? Don’t say that please! 😉
I’m VERY touched by your words on your blog Maryam! The idea behind ‘Ecstasy’ is a wow! Pain when crosses borders, surely becomes ‘Ecstasy’.
Yep, I’m serious… it will really help me, i’m just a starter 🙂 and thank you so much for bundles of appreciation 😛 🙂
I am a starter too, really! But thankyou so very much for honoring my poems. 🙂
you’re so welcome 🙂
And you’re so kind 🙂
And so are you… 😉
I love the idea of the paper version
Thankyou! 🙂
Such beauty!
Ah thanks 🙂
Your visit has been a pleasure, please do come again! =)
– Maria
I will. 😀
Alas! The pillow on which you sleep
Can’t urge you; not to weep
But the tears and emotions that your eyes keep
It can just embrace and let them seep
Absorbing the drops of emotions deep
As you cry; as you weep
It too delves in a journey long
Guided by the mournful song
The tears fall off and trapped are they
But the pillow hears to what they say
Listens to the memories sweet and sour
And begins to wonder in this late hour
Are your joys, sorrows and fears
Trapped within as your tears?
Does your heart too sing the song
Of emotions tender and yet too strong?
Slowly it takes you to the land of dreams
Away from tears and sorrows and screams
And when in midnight you are fast asleep
You may not know but the pillow silently weeps
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I re-read the poem today and became the pillow on which you sleep 😛 🙂
OMG.
Itne lambe poem ka itna sa response 😛
Because I have no idea how to express what this made me feel:
“The tears fall off and trapped are they
But the pillow hears to what they say
Listens to the memories sweet and sour
And begins to wonder in this late hour”
Or how to answer this:
“Are your joys, sorrows and fears
Trapped within as your tears?
Does your heart too sing the song
Of emotions tender and yet too strong?”
And finally how to appreciate this:
“And when in midnight you are fast asleep
You may not know but the pillow silently weeps”
So I will tell how that it’s fantastic and that you’re fantastic too!
Don’t give all the burden of being fantastic on me… Thoda aap bhi share kar len… You are fantastic too 🙂
BTW… Observation skill again… In the left side of your blog where links of many of your posts are given… This post is listed but there is no link linked to it… I thought you would want to correct it
I just noticed that today too. Aur phir socha tha theek krlungi. But somebody got faster. 😛
Done. Thank you!
🙂 You broke the deal… You know that? 😉 😛
Um ouch, how do we say ‘sorry’ in Bengali?
‘Maaf korben dada’ 🙂
Maaf=Maaf
korben=kijiyega
dada= literally means brother, but effectively used for any unrelated male.
Haha okay Maaf korben dada?
Haha… Thik aachhe 😉 (aachhe = hai)
BTW its ‘maaf’ not ‘maak’
And you HAD to point out? 😛
Corrected it. Maaf again.
Yup… It was absolutely essential 😛
I just cant stop reading your posts..
Every post leads to another level..
Love : Hears are meant to be broken, anyways at the end was it all worthy? that matters
Thank you Vino! Your visits and comments mean a lot to me! 🙂
And you’re right. In the end what matters is whether the broken heart or shattered hopes were worth it all? Learning lessons from the first fall enable human to live quality time until the next.
My pleasure Maria:)
sad, bitter, hurt
Sigh, yes.
Thank you for taking out time to scan my archives. And thank you for your comments. 🙂
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Thank you. ❤
I can relate to that wet pillow! Keep writing
=)
Thank you for stopping by!