Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

the art of gibberish

I can not be perfect,
I hate perfection.
I can not please you,
I go my own direction.
I may cause disappointment,
I may root misconception.
But I will create patches,
Whenever tears our relation.

I will keep to stand there
And wait for your reception.

Notes: Sounds meaningless? Great!
Inspiration: 3 words challenge.
( Β© Maria )

43 responses

  1. Nope! Not meaningless at all!πŸ™‚

    September 30, 2013 at 8:51 pm

    • Mehnat zaya kardiπŸ˜‰ JK wusool hogai, though didn’t work for this one.
      Thank you for coming by!πŸ™‚

      September 30, 2013 at 9:10 pm

  2. My type of poem!

    September 30, 2013 at 9:42 pm

  3. Nice poem, but you got it wrong.

    You are perfect you know.
    You fit the Maria Imran shaped hole in the universe perfectly.
    You’re the perfect you.

    What you’re not is the perfect what-somebody-else-wants-you-to-be.
    So why try?

    September 30, 2013 at 10:46 pm

    • You know what those words did?
      Anyways, thank you! I am so not the perfect what-they-want-me-to-be, and you’re right about this. I am me, but that’s so exactly what they don’t want me to be.
      Why try? I don’t know. It’s like following some trait blindly, and stumbling, and following.
      And thanks again for leaving these happy drops.πŸ™‚

      September 30, 2013 at 11:11 pm

      • You know what those words did?

        Umm, maybe.

        Reminded you of what you already knew?
        But had forgotten?
        Because everyone else kept telling you something different?

        I can’t do much with words really.
        Can’t even cast a decent spell with them these days.

        October 1, 2013 at 1:11 pm

        • Yes, probably, exactly.
          They dug something deep and asked me to look over something I don’t see. Plus they surprised me, coming from you!πŸ˜‰
          Don’t you know words really can cast those spells? Well mostly they can.

          October 1, 2013 at 1:35 pm

          • Plus they surprised me, coming from you!πŸ˜‰

            Because they’re not dark, hopeless and cynical?

            Maybe you’re confusing me with someone else.

            Not all my spells are black magic.

            October 1, 2013 at 2:38 pm

          • Haha you know well.
            Not all your spells are ‘black magic’, so this had to surprise me.πŸ˜‰

            October 1, 2013 at 2:58 pm

  4. You know ‘perfects’ are boring…..The real thrill is in being imperfect yet beautiful ! Nothing can be perfect , you may have heard that. But things can be more beautiful than being perfect……
    I hope I make some sense. And it was not meaningless at all……..
    Sae ja rae ho…Keep it upβ€πŸ™‚ Love you !

    October 1, 2013 at 12:45 am

    • ‘Perfects are boring’ you’re right.πŸ˜‰ Shayad because they change themselves so much to gain that ‘perfection’ ke phir they lose their ronaq or inner peace. But to *not* strive for perfection, is more of an art than to be perfect, maybe.

      ‘Nothing can be perfect’ goes right too. And hey, you make all sense.πŸ™‚
      Sae ja rhi hun? ShukryaπŸ˜€ ILYM like always!πŸ˜‰

      October 1, 2013 at 10:13 am

  5. That’s not meaningless-ness! That’s amazing-ness!! I agree with Cabrogal. This is one of your best pieces, Maria.

    October 1, 2013 at 2:31 am

    • Thank you Moniba!πŸ™‚
      I was to write anything using three words of five; so I chose perfect, patch, and disappointment. What I wrote just followed.
      Glad you liked it!❀

      October 1, 2013 at 10:16 am

  6. Here is my definition of perfection: A Fleeting Concept

    Reason: What’s “perfect” to anyone today may not be “perfect” tomorrow. We all change going through this thing called life and our perception of what is “perfect” changes as well, hence my definitionπŸ™‚

    Loved your poem, it’s pithy and meaningful…

    October 1, 2013 at 5:59 pm

    • Thank you for your kind visit and wonderful definition!πŸ™‚

      What’s β€œperfect” to anyone today may not be β€œperfect” tomorrow

      I agree. What’s perfect today won’t be perfect everyday because it doesn’t take much time for perceptions to change! Life is such a roller-coaster.
      Glad you liked the poem. =)

      October 1, 2013 at 6:07 pm

      • Glad you like my definition. I came up with it over 20-years ago and think it is right on and pithy. By the way, where did you get the photo that you use for your Gravatar? It’s stunningly beautiful!!! You are obviously very talented using WordPress and it shows. How long have you been using it? You should add tips and techniques to your blog so we can all learn from you. I’m here for the ride, that’s for sure.

        Thank you for sharing and caring, I love the Open Source Community…

        October 1, 2013 at 6:25 pm

        • You came up with it over 20 years ago? Sounds impressive! =)
          Thankyou for your kind words. But I am on my way learning too..πŸ™‚ It has been three years now that I joined WP.
          About the Gravatar, I don’t exactly remember where I found it from; (and it certainly is not a shot of my own) but I liked it when I saw it and then it became a part of randomlyabstract.πŸ™‚

          Thank you again for your generous remarks! I look forward to your posts, and I hope you will be visiting again!πŸ™‚

          October 1, 2013 at 6:35 pm

          • I am old school technology, i.e. I am a data processor first and foremost and specialize in database design and maintenance through various interfaces but my primary one now is a web page built using php connected to a MySQL database. I have a business partner who handles the web page interface although I can do that too to some extent. I discovered WP about 6-months ago but haven’t really used it as extensively as you have but we are about to start.

            I love the way you have laid out your blog and website. You are very talented and creative and it shows. I plan to study your design for ideas and I hope you don’t mind if I emulate what you have done. If we need help with something that you have already done, would you be willing to help us out? We’re willing to pay you for your help if you are interested.

            Oh, one last thing. I am jealous that you got the name Randomly Abstract because I love it!!! I have always loved Abstract Art and the thought of it being random seems so natural to me. What else could it be, right?

            Now, I think I’ll check out your entire websiteπŸ™‚

            October 2, 2013 at 9:39 am

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  8. Utterly meaningless …. ab kisi ko to tera bharam rkhna tha … so le mai ne keh dia …

    Kia baqwaas thi … na koi sir na pair … aisi aala paye ki bongi to mai ne bhi kabhi nahi mari … !!!πŸ˜€

    October 3, 2013 at 1:51 am

    • Hahahhaha bohat awesome haen app. Shukrya Mani. :’)πŸ˜€

      October 3, 2013 at 7:08 am

      • My pleasure …πŸ˜€

        October 3, 2013 at 1:00 pm

  9. I find it, Simple. Subtle. Soothing- Everything a poem needs to be.
    Keep it up!

    October 5, 2013 at 11:45 pm

    • This is one of the loveliest feed-backs ever received! Thank you Pamela!πŸ™‚
      Best wishes and welcome to my humble blog!

      October 5, 2013 at 11:52 pm

  10. I am like that alot.

    A disappointment, a burden etc

    Read my poetry you will know.

    October 13, 2013 at 12:59 pm

  11. rjl2727

    well now, seems you’ve written the story of my life ere you ever met me. see, i told you i’d be around. now, do you have a spare lifetime to lend me so i can read, absorb, and know everything in my own time?

    October 14, 2013 at 1:36 am

    • Glad you stayed around!
      I wish I could give you that, only that I don’t even know what part of it is left for myself.
      take your time though (:

      October 14, 2013 at 8:10 pm

      • rjl2727

        well, some of my friends believe in the eternal after the death of this life, and wish me to return to that faith. and maybe i will, thus thinking i’d have eternity to finish reading it all. alas, doubtful that anything we write here and now will be found in that realm. therefore, i’m going to quit my jobs and live on welfare so i have abundant time to catch up on reading.

        October 14, 2013 at 8:22 pm

        • I believe in that too.
          But seriously? Live on welfare and win that eternity so that you could spend it on reading? You could do better things like chasing those demons we were talking about.

          October 14, 2013 at 8:33 pm

          • rjl2727

            OK, i will do as you suggest. meanwhile, as with another friend or two, i respect and admire your faith. i just need a little space and time to find mine again. now, where did i leave it?? but i could never quit my jobs because i am blessed to be doing what i love, and gladly submit to 12-14 hour days.

            October 14, 2013 at 8:57 pm

          • I’d never suggest you to leave your jobs either. Do what you love, believe in what you find true.πŸ™‚

            October 14, 2013 at 9:19 pm

          • rjl2727

            will do!! there is no other way.

            October 14, 2013 at 9:22 pm

  12. This perfectly describes how I feel! Expectations lead disappointments. I rather not be considered “perfect” or anything close to it, it leaves room for error to be accepted if it presents itself. Strong piece!

    October 25, 2013 at 8:50 pm

    • Thanks a million, Shanice! Your presence here honors me.πŸ™‚
      Glad you liked the piece, and I think so too. Expectations only lead to shattered hopes.

      October 26, 2013 at 1:03 am

      • Couldn’t agree more.

        Love your work so expect me here oftenπŸ™‚ .

        October 26, 2013 at 1:04 am

        • I’d love to have you here again because as I told you before, I’ve become a huge fan of your work!πŸ™‚

          October 26, 2013 at 1:08 am

  13. fahaad humayun

    so many I
    and I will create patches.

    isn’t the actual problem is I and not perfection?

    May 10, 2014 at 12:36 pm

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