Mae dosry shehar me rehti hun
Mae tum jesi ho hi nahi sakti
Mera karna dharna mery rasm o riwaj
Mera dharam bharam mera kappra libaas
Kbhe tum jesa ye ho nhi sakta.
Mae jeeti alag hun marti alag hun
Khati alag hun peeti alag hun
Tmhary shehar me baarish hoti hogi
Meray shehar me sirf khoon hy barasta
Meray shehar me aag hae jalti
Meray shehar me lashein haen girti
Tum apny shehar ki baarish ko
Kuch waqt yahan kia bhej nhi sakteen?
Written for Mahwi, and one other friend.
She said it was raining. I told her it wasn’t. She complained that we live in the same city. So I wrote to her that. So yes, we live in the same city. But you see, each of us lives in a city of their own – or perhaps a world of their own: unique and personal.
That’s one meaning to it. The other is in reference to someone who really doesn’t live in the same city – or country.
Apologies to those who couldn’t understand the Urdu-English text above and found it nothing more than a bibbery-a-bibbery-boo! (If possible, I’ll post a translation someday soon.)
C: Maria I. *Randomly Abstract*
Randomly Abstract 
Bhale alag ho rasm o riwaaz
Ek hi hoti hai dil ki aawaaz
Alag ho bhaasha, alag ho dhang
Alag nahin hai khoon ka rang
To kyun samajhti hai khud ko alag
Jab ek hi aag rahi dil mein sulag?
Haan barasta hai yahan baadal se paani
Par yahan har boond ki hai alag kahaani
Khushi se naachti hai ye boondein dharti ki god mein
Zindagi ka paigaam le daurti har daal mein
Par kabhi rote hue ke gham ko dhakti hain ye boondein
Aur kabhi ishwar ke aanshoo ban tapakti hain ye boondein
Kya tujhe aisi hi baarish mein hai nahana?
Khushi se hai naachna, ya gham ko hai chhupana?
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Tried to make it as close to Urdu as possible (was very difficult :P)
Oh my God.
*deep sigh*
Okay Arindam. Now that’s something I can not reply to! I won’t thank, I won’t say anything at all. But I’d still expect you to know how much it meant to me. That is, how much every single word meant to me!
🙂 I am glad it meant something to you…
Poem ke last question ka answer bhi nahin dijiyega?
Khushi se hae naachna ya gham ko hae chupana?
Well..
Both?
Pain will reach ecstasy, ecstasy will cross pain.
Tears will collide with laughter and I will go insane.
So come along the path O sister!
Come along through heart’s way
I will be waiting in the rain
Come along your heart’s sway
And then together we will just wander
With the breeze; in the rains
We will laugh our hearts out
Free the emotions bound in chains
And then O sister! We would just stand
Just to hear a falling drop
The tiny drop of mighty rain
Meeting its destiny and brought to stop
You may then cry; and cry aloud
As none but me would see your tears
The sound of thunder would mask your sound
And drops of rain would hide your fears
We would thus laugh and cry in rain
And journey through loss and gain
Pain will reach ecstasy, ecstasy will cross pain.
Tears will collide with laughter and we will go insane.
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The last lines of your previous comment were too good. They are the brightest pearls of this small necklace 🙂
I don’t deserve this!!
Thanks a million? It is beautiful indeed!
You may then cry; and cry aloud
As none but me would see your tears
The sound of thunder would mask your sound
And drops of rain would hide your fears
Love it!
I will come, and you will see
So we’ll rejoice and dance with glee!
None but us, just me and he
To world will we say goodbye and flee.
Uh Oh! Itni jaldi bhaag gayin duniya se? Chalo koi nahin…
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Flee to the lands of freedom and smiles
Where joy seems sprinkled across the miles
Serenity prevails and home finds peace
There are no tears and strife does cease
Where clouds of agony and pain are destroyed
A-midst the peace; what remains is void
Showers of blessings inundate the soul
We came from void, and back there is our goal
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Kal thoda busy tha so likh nahin paaya….
Sorry to break the flow…
BTW… I am LOVING this! 🙂
Oh my God. Ye kia kar rahy haen?
And what do I answer now? Thank you kehny ki ijazat hoti tou it would have been easier.
“Flee to the lands of freedom and smiles
Where joy seems sprinkled across the miles
Serenity prevails and home finds peace
There are no tears and strife does cease”
Love it.
So true.
Matti se banay haen, matti hi muqaddar
Matti hi zindagi, matti hi sikandar.
(where matti is the sand of creation, muqaddar is destiny, zindagi is zindagi, sikandar means guard/defender.)
Na tum ho mujh se juda
Na main hoon tumse alag
Ho bhala shehr alag, desh alag
Ya gharane alag
Par zameen wahi jis pe tumne ghar banaye
Mera asmaan wahi jo tumhara chat(roof) hai
Hoti hogi baarsaat yahan
Aata hoga sawaan yahan
Par tum kya janoun yeh badal kyun rotey hain yeh kyun kadakte hain
Tumhare ghar se guzarte yeh yahan aate hain
Usney wo aag dekhi hai jiska humne sirf zikr suna hain
Yeh boondein khushi ki nahin
Yeh gham aur bebasi k ansuhain
Jo badal ki aankh se nikalte
Yeh un badalou ko na rok sake
Jissey khoon barsata hai
Yeh aag na bujh sakein jisne tumhare ghar jalayein
Yeh mehez paani k qatrey nahi hain
Yeh nidamat k aansu hain
Jo badal aake yahan barsaate hain
Aur pados ki kahani ro ro kar sunate hain
Tumchahti nidamat k aansu wahan barsey?
Nahi, pados mein, kuch log hain bastey
Kuch tum khair-khwah hai sacche
Inki khwahish hai tum dekhe hanstey bastey…….
Its sooo crappy compared to what u havewritten bus jo dimaagh mein aaya likhte gayi. 🙂
Great great work. Lovely 😀
Kuch tumhare khair-khwah*
Inki khwahish hai tumko*
OMG i just read the comments written above and now I am embarassed of my comment. * hides her face and runs away*
Stupid baat hy -_-
The comments above came from a *different personality*. And YOU are an altogether *different soul*. Har koi unique hota hy, har ek ki apni value hoti hy.
Jo apka comment hae, wo mery lye kitna special hy you do know, right?
*don’t you run away, come back!* 😀
Okay ji 🙂
That means alot. *runs back to u* 😛
Yaaaay! *gives a hug* 😀
Itni achchhi poetry likhkar koi embarrassed hota hai bhala?
Brilliantly written 🙂 Mujhse to laakh guna achchha hai
Thank you! I like yours better. 🙂
You like his, he likes yours. mae kahan jaun? 😉 😛
Allah!
Listen miss. This is wonderful.
Wo aag waqai nhi dekhi.
Sirf zikar hi suna hy.
Nhi janti thi ke ye baadal
Usi ka pegham dety haen
Ye bonden tab bhi girti theen?
Ye ansu tab bhi behty the
Wo tab bhi sulagty the
juse kisi aag me jalty the
‘lashen girti rehti theen’
bijli chamakti rehti thi
phir ruk gyi thi na khoon ki holi?
baarish bhi phir tham hi gyi thi
Ansu aj bhi girty haen
bebasi aj bhi hansti hy!
You are amazing, miss M. And this isn’t ‘crappy’ for God sake. I love the ending and I love you for that!
Tumchahti nidamat k aansu wahan barsey?
Nahi, pados mein, kuch log hain bastey
Kuch tum khair-khwah hai sacche
Inki khwahish hai tum dekhe hanstey bastey…….
Love your reply. Thats enough “shairi” aaj k liye.:P I have no words to reply.
Wo aapka nazr(zehen) e-karam ka kamal hai 😉 lol thanks 🙂
‘Nazar-e-karam’ lol thank you! 😉
Loved your response more. And you were actually the first one to read it I think. After all wahan baarishen horhi hyn. 😉
Too bad! you say ending is the best… aur wahi nahin samajh mein aayi… Too many unknown words…
nidamat ke aansoo
khair-kwah
I need to brush up my urdu skills – As if I have any 😛
Nidamat ke ansu is sharmindigi ke ansoo? Sharmindigi is pachtawa? Ugh, I need to brush up my English skills now. 😀
Pachtawa is to repent? No, nidamat is penitence. 🙂
Sharmindagi samajh mein aa gaya… Pachhtaawaa aur repent ka matlab bhi aata hai… 🙂
Thanks!
Welcome.
Niadmat toh samjh gaye aap. Khair khwah is well-wisher. 🙂
Exactly.
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This was awesome as is, comments just made it go beyond awesome. 🙂
ikr? I didn’t know this would become such a ‘poetic thread’. Thank you so much! 🙂
Kavita pe kavita likhe jaa rahin nain aap aur kehtin hain ki main bada poet hoon? 😛
Khud kia kar rhy haen? Ab tak 3 tou likh chuky haen 😛
Awesome.
Main to bas Bhaavaabhivyakti kar raha tha 😉
Bhaavaabhivyakti =Bhaava + abhivyakti (Expression of feelings)
Haha cool! Bhaavabhivyakti se longer word could have done too. 😀
Mae bhi yehi kr rhi hun. 😛
Lambe words se yaad aaya… Check this out in Sanskrit…
अनार्य्रजुष्टमस्वर्ग्यमकीर्तिकरमर्जुन
Anaaryajushtamaswargyamakeertikaramarjuna
🙂
One sentence in one word…
Anaar what? English please, google is a loser as I told you before. 🙂
🙂 You won’t find its translation in google… It’s too complicated for it to translate 🙂 😉
For pronunciation sake, the word can be broken down as
Anaarya-justam-aswargyam-akeerti-karam-arjuna
Literal translation goes as
“O Arjuna! This is an act of cowards; an act that denies you heavens and an act that spreads ill fame.”
(You see… One sentence in one word :))
This is a line taken from a couplet of Gita. So to understand its complete meaning some background is required… Do you know of Gita or Mahabharata?
Sorry for not being able to reply earlier. No, I do not know anything about them.
So who are they?
‘Who’ nahin ‘What’…
Requires long explanation… Abhi mobile se utna nahin likh paaunga… Do char din baad batata hoon jab mere pass laptop pe net hoga…
Okaaay.. Gonna wait for you to come back.
Okay so Mahabharata is an epic of Hindu mythology. It is basically a story of a war within a royal family for kingdom…
The whole family gets divided (due to very interesting and complicated reasons) into two sides ready to take each other’s life in the battlefield of Kurukshetra (near modern day Delhi).
Ultimately a fierce battle is fought. Bothe sides face severe losses. But overall the ‘good’ people called ‘pandavas’ win over the bad peaple called ‘kauravas’.
Gita is a very small part of Mahabharata. It is the part when both armies are face to face in the battlefield and the war is about to start. At that moment Arjuna, a prime warrior of the Pandavas looks at the ‘enemies’ only to find his own family members, teachers, brothers etc. He is shattered thinking that he would have to kill his own family to win the battle. He reports his desire to throw down his arms and die in battle rather than kill his family to his friend Krishna.
Krishna then by amicably rationales Arjuna out of his dilemma and successfully persuades him to fight the war. The conversation deals with many different questions regarding life, death, duty, sadness, happiness etc. and their answers Gita is the conversation between Arjuna and Krishna.
The line that I quoted is part of first dialogue by Krishna. After listening to the reasons quoted by Arjuna on why he should not fight the war (which include the sin incurred by killing his own family, the love for the young, respect for elders and the fact that materialistic things like kingdom are irrelevant etc etc) Krishna starts off by saying that his arguments are wise but cowardly and should not be practiced…
Kuch samajh mein aaya? Maine world’s longest epic (Mahabharata) aur world’s shortest religious book (Gita) ko ek comment mein summarise kiya hai… 😛
OMG this was interesting!
An act of cowardliness but sense of duty, love, family bond?
Both were wise in their own ways, as in Krishna and Arjuna. BUT sacrificing one’s family or friendship isn’t worth a kingdom, is it? Or that is that, puraani kahawat..?
Thank you for your timely explanation! 😉
Well… that is why I say Hindu mythology sometimes amazes me 😉 Kahani mein bahut saare twists hain… 😉
Agar kabhi time mile aur religious reservations na ho to Mahabharata padhna (ya TV serial dekhna)… Just as a story… Guaranteed Maza aayega… This epic has no real hero and villein… And the story is awesome… makes you think… 🙂
Haha hindi after such a long time. Bhavuk hogaye sab 😛
Miss M. I don’t know what bhavuk is!
i see how Urdu has perked everyone up 🙂
🙂
It just took me almost half an hour to read the post and the comments altogether…..
AWESOME !! Itnay keemti Pearls bikhray huay hain is post me kesay samaitun 😉 It would be odd to appreciate you people Maria , Arindam and Miss Maqsood…. The post and every comment is a master piece at its own place.
I would like to participate too…..
Shehar alag hotay hun gay Mulk alag hotay hun gay
Per is aarzi had-bandi se Dil tu alag naheen hotay
Khoon ka rang bhi surkh rehta hai , Safaid naheen ho jata
Dil aik sath dharakta hai, dour rehnay se koi ghair naheen ho jata
Dukh tu sab k saanjhay hotay hain, ye deewarain gir jaen gi
Ansu ponchnay ko hath tu barhao, deewarain kuch na ker paen gi
Aik jism hai aik hi rooh , Abhi kuch insaaniyat baaki hai
Ye zulm kernay walay naheen jantay, Allah hamara saathi hai
Barishain bhi aen gi, shaadmanay bhi bajain gay aik din
Bus pyar ko thamay rakho, Insaan ‘aik’ hun gay aik din
Abhi tu No-javanu ne Iqbal ka shaheen banna hai, wo waqt ay ga
Jab ye simta hua Sehraa aik baar pher zameen pe pahil jaay ga
Aman ki Bansuri bajaay gi Jab Koi khoon na bahaay ga
Barishain hun gi , khoub hun gi aur koi dukh tujhe na chuaay ga 🙂
It was a 5 minutes try so please bear with it 😛 I just wanted to give my try too 😉 And I must say You have done a superb job to initiate this discussion 🙂
~ “Khoon ka rang bhi surkh rehta hai , Safaid naheen ho jata
Dil aik sath dharakta hai, dour rehnay se koi ghair naheen ho jata
Aik jism hai aik hi rooh , Abhi kuch insaaniyat baaki hai
Ye zulm kernay walay naheen jantay, Allah hamara saathi hai
Barishain bhi aen gi, shaadmanay bhi bajain gay aik din
Bus pyar ko thamay rakho, Insaan ‘aik’ hun gay aik din
Jab ye simta hua Sehraa aik baar pher zameen pe pahil jaay ga
Aman ki Bansuri bajaay gi Jab Koi khoon na bahaay ga
Barishain hun gi , khoub hun gi aur koi dukh tujhe na chuaay ga” ~
Lalarukh!!! (pehly there were about twenty exclamation marks here, then I realized what I was doing.)
Mera mood kharab tha. Ab I feel awesome. Thank you!
Glad you too participated, yours is lovely! AMAZING truly. The way you took it, from sehraa to Iqbal to khoon na bahay ga and gham na chowey ga – I can never appreciate you enough.
To be honest, I didn’t know ye post itna valuable hojaega mery lye. I wasn’t expecting this amazing response, by such amazing writers. (ek tou i wasnt posting this coz its urdu, phir kiya to comments off krdye the, wo kholy to ye sary shaaiir agaye 😉 )
You’re right:
“Shehar alag hotay hun gay Mulk alag hotay hun gay
Per is aarzi had-bandi se Dil tu alag naheen hotay”
*thumbs up* for this ^
Thank you for your time, and your words, and your visit!
“Ye zulm kernay walay naheen jantay, Allah hamara saathi hai
Barishain bhi aen gi, shaadmanay bhi bajain gay aik din
Bus pyar ko thamay rakho, Insaan ‘aik’ hun gay aik din
Abhi tu No-javanu ne Iqbal ka shaheen banna hai, wo waqt ay ga”
Yaar 5 min meib you have written so well, I wonder what could u write if you take time and write sukoon se 🙂
Very well-written actually. ❤
Haha ! I would have loved those twenty ones 😛
Yaar itna b acha nae hai bus tum achi ho isleye tumhain acha lag gya 🙂 It was just a random-thoughts-penning-down-process-of-5-minutes-initiated-by-Maria 😀 Kuch zada lamba hogya I guess 😛
Well bus daikh lu pher tum kitna impressive likhti ho 😉
Thank you so very much for appreciating me and letting me participate on your precious blog ! 😉 ;Love you !
Haha here you go:
ILYM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (No idea kitny, and don’t you count too 😉 ..)
Well han bohaat awesome likhti hun mae, bohaat shukrya apka. Apna credit kabhi na lega. ‘ye to bus random penning down thi’ initiated by maria, thankyou for letting me participate in your ‘precious’ blog’ OMG. 😀
Uff Lala, Thank YOU for valuing me with your words bhuiii.
On a side note:
Mae soch ke nhi bolti. Tou if you mind anything any day let me know. Theek?
haaaan better now 😉 😛
Hahaha na kero yaar ! Me tu new new ae hun writing ki field me tum tu meray se b pehlay se likh rae ho your writings are definitely better than me.
Araay abi tum soch k nae bolti tu itna acha bolti ho jab soch k bolnay lag jao gi tu pata nae kya hoga 😛 Inqalaab aa jay ga blogging ki duniya me 😀
Love you yaar I won’t mind at all anything ever !! 🙂 ❤
Inqilaaaaaab 😀 Lol Pakistan me ek yehi inqilab reh gya hae ajaega ek din =p
Glad you don’t mind my stupid harkaten, thank you for always being together! 🙂
Haha abi tu baray inqalaab anay hain yaar….daikhna mark my words 😉
And no need to thank me, you are such a sweetheart for always being there for me too 🙂 xx
Marked. 😉
Wah re Urdu! Uff ye Urdu! 🙂
Itni saari Urdu… Maine to kabhi Urdu padha bhi nahin formally… Bus kisi tarah samajh mein aaya… Bachche ki jaan loge kya? Dekho… don’t force me… warna shuddh hindi shuru kar doonga… Phir lekar baithna hindi to urdu dictionary…
Waise bahut achchha likha hai tune
“Abhi tu No-javanu ne Iqbal ka shaheen banna hai, wo waqt ay ga
Jab ye simta hua Sehraa aik baar pher zameen pe phail jaay ga”
Loved it!
“Barishain hun gi , khoub hun gi aur koi dukh tujhe na chuaay ga ”
Ab aisi baat kar hi di hai to ye sun, continuation mein…
Aur phir jab baadal garjenge
Garaj-garaj phir barsenge
Jab naachega phir se saawan
Pulkit kar man-van-upvan
Prafullit ho jab snigdh pawan
Daurega harshit kar har man
Tab zanjeerein khul jaayengi
Deewaren bhi gir jaayengi
Phir ek honge hamare sheher
Gaaon nadiyan, sagar, neher
Ek hogi dil ki aawaaz
Shanti ka hoga naya aagaaz
5 mins again! 🙂
OMG awesomeeeeeeeee. Ye five minute writers bhi na, I don’t even know how to appreciate them!
And guess what Arindam?
Jantay ho kia
Mery shehar me barish barsi thi!
Han mery shehar me
Bonnden giri theen
Badal bhi garjay the
Bijli bhi chamki thi
Ansu bhi tapky the
Aur qehqahy bhi gonjy the!
Weeran si basti me
Kahen jal bujh jal bujh krti
Roshnian bhi bikhri theen
Zanjiren bhi toti theen
Sehra bhi simty the
Shehar bhi sab jurr gae the
Nadyan sagar nehren sab
Akhir mil ke ek hue the
Ya phir shayad
Ye phir shayad ek khwab tha ye sab
Ye khait to sary sookhy haen!
Nadyan sagar nehren basti
Kab hi mil paen ge akhir?
Kia barish waqai barsey gi?
Kia aansu waqai tapken ge?
Okay… This one dedicated to… this ‘real’ virtual family, my wonderful poet friends here, our languages, our culture and this lovely Indo-Pak bond 🙂
Mujhe to baadal dikhte hain
Jazbaaton ke, armaanon ke
Matwaale kadam bhi dikhte hain
Thirakte us saawan ke
Dekh ri pagli is baarish ne
Bhaashaa ke bandhan torr diye
Alfaazon ki tubandi ne
Laakhon man jhakjhor diye
Hindi Urdu Angrezi ne
In sarhadon ko bhi paar kiya
Shabdon ki is aandhi ne
Har deewar par hai waar kiya
Alag alag in sharahon mein
Ek saath hai barsaat hui
Ek sur mein log bole hain
Ek nazm mein ye baat hui
Tu dekhna kabhi in baaton ko
Shabdon ko alfaazon ko
Har bachcha bachcha gaayega
Aur isi tarah in mulkon mein
Shaanti ka paigaam failaayega
Phir dekhna baarish barsegi
Khushiyon ke saugaaton ki
Aur khushi ke aansu tapkenge
Hum dono ke aankhon se!
Oh my GOD!
“dekh ri pagli is baarish ne
Bhaashaa ke bandhan torr diye
Alfaazon ki tubandi ne
Laakhon man jhakjhor diye
Hindi Urdu Angrezi ne
In sarhadon ko bhi paar kiya
Shabdon ki is aandhi ne
Har deewar par hai waar kiya
Alag alag in sharahon mein
Ek saath hai barsaat hui
Ek sur mein log bole hain
Ek nazm mein ye baat hui”
FANTASTIC!
Phir dekhna baarish barsegi
Khushiyon ke saugaaton ki
Aur khushi ke aansu tapkenge
Hum dono ke aankhon se!
I never knew this thread was ever going to become such poetic, where me and you from Pakistan and ‘Bharat’ will come and ‘ek hi nazam me baat krenge’. If there is ‘aman ki asha’ it is this.
Mega *thumbs-up* for this
lastlatest!Ab dekh lia ke toot gaye
Wo bandhan sary ‘bhasha’ ke
Wo talwaren bhi nayam me gyeen
Wo ansu bhi sab sookh gaye
Kash ke ruk jae sabhi
Aur na bahey phir khoon kabhi
Kash ke phir na lahu girey
Na tapkay phir ansoo koi
Kash ke aesy hi tham jae
Wo jang bhi akhir ab ruk jae
Kash ke phir na nafrat ho
Kash phir sirf rugbat ho.
🙂 Wah!
Ab main kuchh nahin bolunga… Kuchh nahin…
Waise… recently pata chala ki aap mujhse bhi chhoti hain… 😛 (Zyada nahin but phir bhi…) Itni chhoti umar mein itna talent… Maan gaya yaar!
And a small query… Who is the great personality who originally said that it was raining? 😛 (refer to the title of the post)
Ek minute. Who’s there spilling my age and bio?
*secret*… 🙂
Just kidding… aapke recent post se pata chala… Well comments to be precise… Just observation power…
Post “Rotten Rose” comment by Paras…
Concluded that you are a teen
On my post “Hostel in exam mode” by your comment
Concluded you have completed pre-engineering
So you must be in higher side of teen age
And I am 21…
So you are younger than me…
No one is spilling your age or bio
Offended? Sorry… You may remove the comment… Sorry once again… Didn’t mean to hurt you… 😦
Haha people have actually been ‘stalking’!
I am not removing the comment, nor am I offended. I was just surprised because I don’t think I ever exposed ‘personal info’ before.
Yeap I am younger than you are. 😉
Stalking? Na jee… Just observation and inference… Nothing else… Science student hoon… Itna to aata hi hai… 🙂 😉
Right. ‘Observation and inference’. Physics students can do that. 😉
Yup… Aap bhi to physics (engineering) student hi hain right? Aapse behtar kaun jaanega… 😉
Oye yaar, so sorry again… I shouldn’t have said what I said. Maaf kar dijiye please!
I didn’t mind it, I said. Why the apology?
Darr lagta hai yaar… Pata nahi kaun kis baat ka bura maan le…
Darrtey rehye, achi baat hy. 😉
Apart from that, there were two friends as I mentioned. The ‘Mahwi’ I sent it to had responded with ‘something’ then I wrote her ‘something’ again and after posting it you all came up with so many ‘somethings’ and this finally became a ‘magical piece’ for me.
Here is what she wrote to me:
“Zindagi adhuri hae
Bin tery udasi hae
Jb kbhi bety lamhe tmko
Yad aen tou loat aana
Bhuly basry rastun pe
Jb kbh chalna tm
Guzry lamhon ko phir se yad krlena
Ek yhe wada hae tmse mera —
Zindagi ke mailun me
Mjhko bhi rkhna yad
Sath tou chut’te haen
Yaden hi baqi rehti hayn
Un yadon me phir mjhko
Zinda tm rakhlena.”
Nice one… But I am confused… isme baarish kahan hai?
Kaheen nhi. 😉 Sirf feelings pour out ho rhi theen.
🙂
So So Amazing !!
Thanks!
Ye samajh mein aa gaya? 😛
Phir bhi let us see…
Matwaale = Paagal
Thirakte = Naachte
Tukbandi (sorry for the typo… I missed the ‘k’) = rhyming
Anything else?
han isme tu samaj aa gya tha except the last one word….
Nothing else bro ! you already did much 😛
Wow! Really well versed. Hindi took me back to school 😛
Oh! So you had Hindi in school?
Indian hoon to lazmi baat hai hindi to be in my syllabus. 🙂
Oops! *embarrassment* Sorry 😛
I was thinking to tell you phir socha she will tell herself. 😀
I told you not to think much… just act
Oh! Didn’t I” I should have…
Oh didn’t I? I shouldn’t have either! She should 😉
*sigh* I know…
*applauds*
Applaud was for your replied poem maria 🙂
Oh the last ab dekh lia ke toot gaya wali? 🙂
Haha bus ker yaar hindi ( Artificial wali 😉 ) urdu jesi e tu hai ….
Aur ye tu ne real wali hindi likh k acha nae kia 😛 😛 Muje tu koi nae aa rae samaj 😛
bus third line tak ae hai samaj….Ab isko translate ker k likh dain please 😛
And I salute you for all your five min poetry ! So Impressive.
Exactly. Translate krden. Even I don’t know what that hindi word meant that I used in my last poetry. =p
OK… Let us see…
“Saawan” is a month (iconic of monsoon season)
“Pulkit”, “Prafullit”, “Harshit” all mean Happy
“Van” means Forest
“Upvan” means Garden
“Snigdh” means perfumed or scented
and
“Aagaaz” means begining… (this is Urdu I guess)
Now is it clear? Or you still require the complete translation?
Sawan and Aagaaz are known. And it’s clear now, thank you. (atleast to me, Rukh will answer the rest) What’s bhasha??
Language… I guess you call it Zubaan in Urdu
Oh okay great, thank you!
Daantu tu mat 😛
Haaan ab samaj me aa gaya 😛
Ab kahan daantaa?
You know every comment without a smiley seems like a daant to me 😛
Uff… Is larki ka main kya karoon?
Maria? Any ideas?
Haha no, she likes ‘smileys’ pretty much.
Hahaha Is larki ka kuch nae ho sakta 😛 Hopeless case :p
My expertise is on hopeless cases 😉
I want to stay hopeless 😉
Great (y)
Arindam your ‘expertise’ is to tested then.
You would…
My expertise is to maintain hopelessness in the person 😉 😉 😉
Ae haey. I got bilawaja ki hope that you’d deal with her and ‘bring her hope’. =p
What’s bilawaja?
Uh bila waja. Is bina waja. Is without reason. As in ‘I was hopeful you’d deal with her and gift her ‘hope’ because she says she’s hopeless! 😉 But you say your expertise is to maintain her hopelessness. 😀
😉 You see…”Kahani mein TWIST” 😀
Haha right
Just as I was about to forget… Eid ka gift? 😛
As in you’re giving one? Sounds great! 😉
But hey, here’s biryani. If the link doesn’t work, trust me I had good intentions!
Biryani achchhi thi… Achchha hai… khane ke time pe mil gayi…
And… MAIN, I mean Arindam Saha, AAPKO, I mean Maria Imran ko GIFT doon?
OK no problem… 😛 Kya chahiye?
Glad you liked. I didn’t cook it. 😛
What’s with the gift, itna shock? After all I’m a ‘junior didi’ right?
😉 Nah… You are a ‘friend’… right? 😉 But I don’t have any problems with the ‘junior didi’ name 😛
Waise poochha to… Kya chaahiye? Jo chaahe Wo milega… 😉
Jo ap khushi se den! 🙂
Presenting…. “Narkel er Naaru” 🙂 Badi mehnat se dhoondha hai 🙂
Haha nice. Bengali dish? Thank you!
Yup… literally means “A sweet made of coconut” 🙂
(Bengal is famous for its sweet dishes and fish… want some fish?)
I have had enough ‘bakray ka gosht’ today 😉 But I’ll love fish anyway 🙂
Naam image par likha hai… Sambhal ke khaayiega… Bahut kaante hote hain, aur bahut taste bhi 🙂
It does look tasty! 😀
Fridge mein rakh dein agar pet bharaa ho to… Kal kha lijiyega 😉
*thumbs up* 😉
Exactly, daanta kahan? 😛
Bhavuk = emotional 🙂
Oh nice 😉
this one requires a good bit of thought, which i suppose is it’s value
This one was an Urdu poetry, written for a friend. 🙂 And posting it resulted in the on-spot creation of a number of poems from other Indian and Pakistani writers making it a very memorable experience for myself! =)
A small token of appreciation for the days of endless poetry
http://whenintrovertspeaks.wordpress.com/baarishein-hongi-zaroor-hongi/
I wanted to do that! But I couldn’t have done it any better! Thank you SO much Arindam, it means a lot!
Any possible improvements on the titles of the ‘Threads’?
I have still not finalized the post… So any suggestions are welcome…
Or the title?
I think it’s perfect the way it is.
Oops… I forgot to give your link… Doing it now… 🙂
I was also planning to collect all my ‘response poems’… as pages on my blog… So I wanted your permission for those on your blog… What say?
You could also link White Pearl and Miss Maqsood’s blog.
And your poems are your poems! Why would I not permit? 🙂
Yup… Will do that…
Because currently my poems are currently lying as comments on your blog… 😉
I know, and that is pretty ungrateful on my side. 😦 But I have got a post lined up for some in-response poems though I was waiting for graphics.
There’s an image waiting to be posted when I re-blog this post of yours. 😉 😛
Sorry… didn’t get you 😦 😛
I mean to say, that it’s pretty ungrateful of me that all those amazing in-response poems are currently lying as comments only. I wanted to post them but was so caught up, and wanted to design some images to suit them, therefore it took a long time.
Oh… Yeh bhi koi ungratefulness hai?
Aapka jab man chaahe post kar dena… (if at all you want to post them)
I am collecting them for my record only… (pataa nahin kab dost bichhar jaayen… tab un poems ko padh ke yaad kar liya karoonga :))
Aur aise bhi… I will keep them as pages and not posts
Exactly. Kab ye blog delete hojae aur baarishen ruk jaen. 😉
P.S. My comments are all going in spam. :S Those on other blogs. What do I do?
Uh… problem… Same problem occurred a few more of my friends (including Lala)…
So…
1. Che if you have approved any spam comment…
2. Report to the ‘Akismet’ spam blocker… I mean write email… For Lala they took a three odd days (ya… that’s sad)
3. If those don’t work… tab dekhenga kya hota hai… Bataiyega… aapko ek jugaad bataaunga 😛 😉
I haven’t approved one lately out of spam, but I have put some there from my approved ones. As in some pingbacks.
Mery pas sab comments arahe haen, dosron ke paas mery not going. 😦
I know… same problem as hers…
Lodge a complaint… Phir dekhte hain
If you want to contact me anytime… you can mail me 🙂
I know situations can become annoying…
Annoying yep. And thank you! I’ll try to lodge a complaint. =)
I tried to confirm that I received your notification BUT that went in spam too! How awesome is that? I won’t even tell anybody now to check there. If I am in spam, there I’ll remain. 😦
Write a post na… Your post will not be spammed…
Emailed to Akismet?
Not emailed yet..
So do it… you lazy person! 🙂 😉 😛 (Kidding)
Meanwhile I unspammed your response
I wanted to tell you myself what a lazy person I am, but you guessed it too! 🙂 Yeah, I’ll write a post. I’ll email them too. I’ll do it some time. 😛
Mujhe pataa hai… 😛 Observation power again… 😉
And look in this link too… if you get any help
http://foodpeopleloveandstuff.wordpress.com/2013/08/15/please-look-into-your-spam-folders-to-read-my-comments/
Lol okay. 🙂
I can exactly copy-paste Lala’s post, right? Or is that plagiarism? 😛
You know the answer right? But still… to formally answer your question… that is plagiarism…. Aalsi! 😛
Read the comments there
And I am going offline for a couple of hours (classes)… So if any help is required from me… wait for sometime… 🙂
Sure! 🙂
It got solved out khud se! 🙂
Great!
What was the problem?
I don’t know but I think I am seeing my comments now. Probably after you un-spammed and one other blogger did too, phir it got alright.
🙂 Great!
Party! Aap to de dijiye… Lala ne to nahin diya tha… 😉
ধন্যবাদ ! =p
😀 Woh to theek hai… but… kaam ki baat yeh hai ki meri party kahaan hai?
Uhm. Party. uhh how do we give an online party?
Real party… not online… 😉
Come to Kolkata 😉 and we shall see 😛
Anyways… Congrats and Happy Blogging 🙂
You want party na? Come to Karachi and we’ll have loads of fun. 😉 😛
And thanks.
Aaunga kabhi…
Waise aap mere blog per guest ban ke kab aa rahi hain?
Inshaa Allah someday soon. =p
‘Inscribed within a word’…. I have got to think.
Think Think…
One curiosity… What does Insha Allah mean?
If God wills.
Okay… thanks… 🙂
No problem!:)
And… occasionally try karte rahiye… If the problem is resolved… (well that was obvious)
One more point… the problem may arise also from the fact that someone has spammed your comment (by mistake) and from then on wards the spam detector regards all your comments as spam… (WP ke time pe kisi forum pe padha tha)
So you could write a post urging the people to unspam any of your comments which are in the spam folder…
Ahaan. Okay. They’re insane.
I put this into google translate but it didn’t translate. Strange. 😦
Aw I am so sorry for that! Thank you for your interest though. I’ll hopefully translate this one soon and either post it on my blog or email it to you. 🙂
Hawh 😦
Very well written!
Shukriya! 🙂 Was reading this a while ago myself. All them cross-border, cross-city memories.
Nahi aap ka shukriya kai aapnai itnee achee poem share kee. 🙂
It really makes me think about Pak!
🙂
Can I ask somethinggg? *already asking* You don’t live here, right? Saudi Arabia?
What makes you say that ? 😛
Matlab yes? :p
Pahlai aap batain na what made you think that? XD
I have some good skills Alhamdulillah..
Alhamdulilah
Yep 😛 I’m in KSA. :3
You guessed because of 7bbty? 😛
No. :p I have site stats which show views country-wise. XD City poochun?
Oh yeah I forgot about that XD
Nai 😛 jab aap milnai aaye ga to poochia ga zaroor 😀
Mai chepak gai hoon blog pai to ziadatar KSA bhara hoga is liye aheheh XD
That’s so bad. Bus sahee hy. *sniffs*
(Lol lots from there. I love that.) xD
Nahi hai bad 😛 *hand a tissue to 7elwa*
Glad you do mai aaj kal blogs hee parh rahee hoon 😛
Hae bad. Mai hart broke lyk dis <//3.
Mae aj kal blogs nahi likh rahi though I'm on vacations too. When I posted the last one tab tou exams bhi horahy the aur ab farigh hun to kuch hae hi nahi. xD
Haw how sad agar <I3 yoon kar kai tootta to bata daytee XD
Yeah I noticed mai qadeem tareen blog posts pai comment kar rahee hoon XD lekin bohat maza aaraha hai!
Likhiye na warna mai aapko BAJI kahna shoro kardoonge XD
Haha what a threat mashaAllah. Nahi nahi don’t call me BAJI, I will write. :3 Remember in prayers. ❤
B/
Yus! 😀
Yes I did remember you and will. In Sha Allah!
Aap say bhi duaoon kee guzarish hai,Maria. ^.^
Aw thank you. So much! And, sure. 🙂
(But if Allah asks me your name, I’ll have to say it’s a mystery) 😉
Welcome ^.^
Awh no prob yara 😛 a mystery to you not to Him.
He looks at the intention :3 JazakAllahKhair!
Chalain ab aap dosree comments parlain phir mai aur comment karongee XD
Barakillah!
Was reading your frn’s comments just now. 😉 And I replied to your email some time ago. Just so you know:)
Ohkay 😀 about 5 seconds ago I replied to your email :3
I really felt happy when I read it. I grinned the BIG grin! 😀
To be honest,I was a bit shy of whether or not I should comment on your blog….
because I thought you might be like where did I pop out from and I don’t even blog!
Before my first comment I had already read alot of your posts 😀 and I still am reading :3 and lovin it.
Keep writing ^.^