Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

Because she said it was raining.

Mae dosry shehar me rehti hun
Mae tum jesi ho hi nahi sakti
Mera karna dharna mery rasm o riwaj
Mera dharam bharam mera kappra libaas
Kbhe tum jesa ye ho nhi sakta.
Mae jeeti alag hun marti alag hun
Khati alag hun peeti alag hun
Tmhary shehar me baarish hoti hogi
Meray shehar me sirf khoon hy barasta
Meray shehar me aag hae jalti
Meray shehar me lashein haen girti
Tum apny shehar ki baarish ko
Kuch waqt yahan kia bhej nhi sakteen?

rain

Written for Mahwi, and one other friend.

She said it was raining. I told her it wasn’t. She complained that we live in the same city. So I wrote to her that. So yes, we live in the same city. But you see, each of us lives in a city of their own – or perhaps a world of their own: unique and personal.

That’s one meaning to it. The other is in reference to someone who really doesn’t live in the same city – or country.

Apologies to those who couldn’t understand the Urdu-English text above and found it nothing more than a bibbery-a-bibbery-boo! (If possible, I’ll post a translation someday soon.)

C: Maria I. *Randomly Abstract*

197 responses

  1. Bhale alag ho rasm o riwaaz
    Ek hi hoti hai dil ki aawaaz
    Alag ho bhaasha, alag ho dhang
    Alag nahin hai khoon ka rang
    To kyun samajhti hai khud ko alag
    Jab ek hi aag rahi dil mein sulag?

    Haan barasta hai yahan baadal se paani
    Par yahan har boond ki hai alag kahaani
    Khushi se naachti hai ye boondein dharti ki god mein
    Zindagi ka paigaam le daurti har daal mein
    Par kabhi rote hue ke gham ko dhakti hain ye boondein
    Aur kabhi ishwar ke aanshoo ban tapakti hain ye boondein

    Kya tujhe aisi hi baarish mein hai nahana?
    Khushi se hai naachna, ya gham ko hai chhupana?

    ===================================================================

    Tried to make it as close to Urdu as possible (was very difficult :P)

    October 6, 2013 at 4:05 pm

    • Oh my God.
      *deep sigh*
      Okay Arindam. Now that’s something I can not reply to! I won’t thank, I won’t say anything at all. But I’d still expect you to know how much it meant to me. That is, how much every single word meant to me!

      October 6, 2013 at 4:10 pm

      • ๐Ÿ™‚ I am glad it meant something to you…

        Poem ke last question ka answer bhi nahin dijiyega?

        October 6, 2013 at 4:13 pm

        • Khushi se hae naachna ya gham ko hae chupana?
          Well..
          Both?
          Pain will reach ecstasy, ecstasy will cross pain.
          Tears will collide with laughter and I will go insane.

          October 6, 2013 at 4:20 pm

          • So come along the path O sister!
            Come along through heart’s way
            I will be waiting in the rain
            Come along your heart’s sway

            And then together we will just wander
            With the breeze; in the rains
            We will laugh our hearts out
            Free the emotions bound in chains

            And then O sister! We would just stand
            Just to hear a falling drop
            The tiny drop of mighty rain
            Meeting its destiny and brought to stop

            You may then cry; and cry aloud
            As none but me would see your tears
            The sound of thunder would mask your sound
            And drops of rain would hide your fears

            We would thus laugh and cry in rain
            And journey through loss and gain
            Pain will reach ecstasy, ecstasy will cross pain.
            Tears will collide with laughter and we will go insane.

            ==========================================================

            The last lines of your previous comment were too good. They are the brightest pearls of this small necklace๐Ÿ™‚

            October 6, 2013 at 5:17 pm

          • I don’t deserve this!!
            Thanks a million? It is beautiful indeed!

            You may then cry; and cry aloud
            As none but me would see your tears
            The sound of thunder would mask your sound
            And drops of rain would hide your fears

            Love it!

            I will come, and you will see
            So we’ll rejoice and dance with glee!

            None but us, just me and he
            To world will we say goodbye and flee.

            October 6, 2013 at 5:47 pm

          • Uh Oh! Itni jaldi bhaag gayin duniya se? Chalo koi nahin…

            =========================================

            Flee to the lands of freedom and smiles
            Where joy seems sprinkled across the miles
            Serenity prevails and home finds peace
            There are no tears and strife does cease

            Where clouds of agony and pain are destroyed
            A-midst the peace; what remains is void
            Showers of blessings inundate the soul
            We came from void, and back there is our goal

            ========================================

            Kal thoda busy tha so likh nahin paaya….
            Sorry to break the flow…

            BTW… I am LOVING this!๐Ÿ™‚

            October 7, 2013 at 7:43 am

          • Oh my God. Ye kia kar rahy haen?
            And what do I answer now? Thank you kehny ki ijazat hoti tou it would have been easier.

            “Flee to the lands of freedom and smiles
            Where joy seems sprinkled across the miles
            Serenity prevails and home finds peace
            There are no tears and strife does cease”

            Love it.

            We came from void, and back there is our goal

            So true.
            Matti se banay haen, matti hi muqaddar
            Matti hi zindagi, matti hi sikandar.
            (where matti is the sand of creation, muqaddar is destiny, zindagi is zindagi, sikandar means guard/defender.)

            October 7, 2013 at 9:18 am

  2. Na tum ho mujh se juda
    Na main hoon tumse alag
    Ho bhala shehr alag, desh alag
    Ya gharane alag
    Par zameen wahi jis pe tumne ghar banaye
    Mera asmaan wahi jo tumhara chat(roof) hai
    Hoti hogi baarsaat yahan
    Aata hoga sawaan yahan
    Par tum kya janoun yeh badal kyun rotey hain yeh kyun kadakte hain
    Tumhare ghar se guzarte yeh yahan aate hain
    Usney wo aag dekhi hai jiska humne sirf zikr suna hain
    Yeh boondein khushi ki nahin
    Yeh gham aur bebasi k ansuhain
    Jo badal ki aankh se nikalte
    Yeh un badalou ko na rok sake
    Jissey khoon barsata hai
    Yeh aag na bujh sakein jisne tumhare ghar jalayein
    Yeh mehez paani k qatrey nahi hain
    Yeh nidamat k aansu hain
    Jo badal aake yahan barsaate hain
    Aur pados ki kahani ro ro kar sunate hain
    Tumchahti nidamat k aansu wahan barsey?
    Nahi, pados mein, kuch log hain bastey
    Kuch tum khair-khwah hai sacche
    Inki khwahish hai tum dekhe hanstey bastey…….
    Its sooo crappy compared to what u havewritten bus jo dimaagh mein aaya likhte gayi.๐Ÿ™‚
    Great great work. Lovely๐Ÿ˜€

    October 7, 2013 at 12:11 am

    • Kuch tumhare khair-khwah*
      Inki khwahish hai tumko*

      October 7, 2013 at 12:13 am

      • OMG i just read the comments written above and now I am embarassed of my comment. * hides her face and runs away*

        October 7, 2013 at 12:45 am

        • Stupid baat hy -_-
          The comments above came from a *different personality*. And YOU are an altogether *different soul*. Har koi unique hota hy, har ek ki apni value hoti hy.
          Jo apka comment hae, wo mery lye kitna special hy you do know, right?
          *don’t you run away, come back!*๐Ÿ˜€

          October 7, 2013 at 12:48 am

          • Okay ji๐Ÿ™‚
            That means alot. *runs back to u*๐Ÿ˜›

            October 7, 2013 at 12:50 am

          • Yaaaay! *gives a hug*๐Ÿ˜€

            October 7, 2013 at 12:55 am

        • Itni achchhi poetry likhkar koi embarrassed hota hai bhala?

          Brilliantly written๐Ÿ™‚ Mujhse to laakh guna achchha hai

          October 7, 2013 at 7:50 am

          • Thank you! I like yours better.๐Ÿ™‚

            October 8, 2013 at 8:24 pm

          • You like his, he likes yours. mae kahan jaun?๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›

            October 11, 2013 at 3:08 pm

    • Usney wo aag dekhi hai jiska humne sirf zikr suna hain
      Yeh boondein khushi ki nahin
      Yeh gham aur bebasi k ansuhain
      Jo badal ki aankh se nikalte
      Yeh un badalou ko na rok sake
      Jissey khoon barsata hai
      Yeh aag na bujh sakein jisne tumhare ghar jalayein
      Yeh mehez paani k qatrey nahi hain
      Yeh nidamat k aansu hain
      Jo badal aake yahan barsaate hain
      Aur pados ki kahani ro ro kar sunate hain
      Tumchahti nidamat k aansu wahan barsey?
      Nahi, pados mein, kuch log hain bastey
      Kuch tum khair-khwah hai sacche
      Inki khwahish hai tum dekhe hanstey basteyโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

      Allah!
      Listen miss. This is wonderful.
      Wo aag waqai nhi dekhi.
      Sirf zikar hi suna hy.
      Nhi janti thi ke ye baadal
      Usi ka pegham dety haen
      Ye bonden tab bhi girti theen?
      Ye ansu tab bhi behty the
      Wo tab bhi sulagty the
      juse kisi aag me jalty the
      ‘lashen girti rehti theen’
      bijli chamakti rehti thi
      phir ruk gyi thi na khoon ki holi?
      baarish bhi phir tham hi gyi thi
      Ansu aj bhi girty haen
      bebasi aj bhi hansti hy!

      You are amazing, miss M. And this isn’t ‘crappy’ for God sake. I love the ending and I love you for that!
      Tumchahti nidamat k aansu wahan barsey?
      Nahi, pados mein, kuch log hain bastey
      Kuch tum khair-khwah hai sacche
      Inki khwahish hai tum dekhe hanstey basteyโ€ฆโ€ฆ.

      October 7, 2013 at 12:44 am

      • Love your reply. Thats enough “shairi” aaj k liye.:P I have no words to reply.
        Wo aapka nazr(zehen) e-karam ka kamal hai๐Ÿ˜‰ lol thanks๐Ÿ™‚

        October 7, 2013 at 12:49 am

        • ‘Nazar-e-karam’ lol thank you!๐Ÿ˜‰
          Loved your response more. And you were actually the first one to read it I think. After all wahan baarishen horhi hyn.๐Ÿ˜‰

          October 7, 2013 at 12:54 am

      • Too bad! you say ending is the best… aur wahi nahin samajh mein aayi… Too many unknown words…

        nidamat ke aansoo
        khair-kwah

        I need to brush up my urdu skills – As if I have any๐Ÿ˜›

        October 7, 2013 at 7:58 am

        • Nidamat ke ansu is sharmindigi ke ansoo? Sharmindigi is pachtawa? Ugh, I need to brush up my English skills now.๐Ÿ˜€
          Pachtawa is to repent? No, nidamat is penitence.๐Ÿ™‚

          October 7, 2013 at 9:04 am

          • Sharmindagi samajh mein aa gaya… Pachhtaawaa aur repent ka matlab bhi aata hai…๐Ÿ™‚

            Thanks!

            October 7, 2013 at 10:14 am

          • Welcome.

            October 7, 2013 at 10:17 am

        • Niadmat toh samjh gaye aap. Khair khwah is well-wisher.๐Ÿ™‚

          October 8, 2013 at 8:25 pm

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  4. This was awesome as is, comments just made it go beyond awesome.๐Ÿ™‚

    October 7, 2013 at 2:04 am

    • ikr? I didn’t know this would become such a ‘poetic thread’. Thank you so much!๐Ÿ™‚

      October 7, 2013 at 9:07 am

  5. Kavita pe kavita likhe jaa rahin nain aap aur kehtin hain ki main bada poet hoon?๐Ÿ˜›

    October 7, 2013 at 7:53 am

    • Khud kia kar rhy haen? Ab tak 3 tou likh chuky haen๐Ÿ˜›
      Awesome.

      October 7, 2013 at 9:08 am

      • Main to bas Bhaavaabhivyakti kar raha tha๐Ÿ˜‰

        Bhaavaabhivyakti =Bhaava + abhivyakti (Expression of feelings)

        October 7, 2013 at 10:17 am

        • Haha cool! Bhaavabhivyakti se longer word could have done too.๐Ÿ˜€
          Mae bhi yehi kr rhi hun.๐Ÿ˜›

          October 7, 2013 at 10:20 am

          • Lambe words se yaad aaya… Check this out in Sanskrit…

            เค…เคจเคพเคฐเฅเคฏเฅเคฐเคœเฅเคทเฅเคŸเคฎเคธเฅเคตเคฐเฅเค—เฅเคฏเคฎเค•เฅ€เคฐเฅเคคเคฟเค•เคฐเคฎเคฐเฅเคœเฅเคจโ€‹

            Anaaryajushtamaswargyamakeertikaramarjuna
            ๐Ÿ™‚

            One sentence in one word…

            October 7, 2013 at 11:37 am

          • Anaar what? English please, google is a loser as I told you before.๐Ÿ™‚

            October 7, 2013 at 11:52 am

          • ๐Ÿ™‚ You won’t find its translation in google… It’s too complicated for it to translate๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‰
            For pronunciation sake, the word can be broken down as
            Anaarya-justam-aswargyam-akeerti-karam-arjuna

            Literal translation goes as

            “O Arjuna! This is an act of cowards; an act that denies you heavens and an act that spreads ill fame.”

            (You see… One sentence in one word :))

            This is a line taken from a couplet of Gita. So to understand its complete meaning some background is required… Do you know of Gita or Mahabharata?

            October 7, 2013 at 1:26 pm

          • Sorry for not being able to reply earlier. No, I do not know anything about them.
            So who are they?

            October 10, 2013 at 5:34 pm

          • ‘Who’ nahin ‘What’…
            Requires long explanation… Abhi mobile se utna nahin likh paaunga… Do char din baad batata hoon jab mere pass laptop pe net hoga…

            October 11, 2013 at 10:07 am

          • Okaaay.. Gonna wait for you to come back.

            October 11, 2013 at 1:45 pm

          • Okay so Mahabharata is an epic of Hindu mythology. It is basically a story of a war within a royal family for kingdom…

            The whole family gets divided (due to very interesting and complicated reasons) into two sides ready to take each other’s life in the battlefield of Kurukshetra (near modern day Delhi).

            Ultimately a fierce battle is fought. Bothe sides face severe losses. But overall the ‘good’ people called ‘pandavas’ win over the bad peaple called ‘kauravas’.

            Gita is a very small part of Mahabharata. It is the part when both armies are face to face in the battlefield and the war is about to start. At that moment Arjuna, a prime warrior of the Pandavas looks at the ‘enemies’ only to find his own family members, teachers, brothers etc. He is shattered thinking that he would have to kill his own family to win the battle. He reports his desire to throw down his arms and die in battle rather than kill his family to his friend Krishna.

            Krishna then by amicably rationales Arjuna out of his dilemma and successfully persuades him to fight the war. The conversation deals with many different questions regarding life, death, duty, sadness, happiness etc. and their answers Gita is the conversation between Arjuna and Krishna.

            The line that I quoted is part of first dialogue by Krishna. After listening to the reasons quoted by Arjuna on why he should not fight the war (which include the sin incurred by killing his own family, the love for the young, respect for elders and the fact that materialistic things like kingdom are irrelevant etc etc) Krishna starts off by saying that his arguments are wise but cowardly and should not be practiced…

            Kuch samajh mein aaya? Maine world’s longest epic (Mahabharata) aur world’s shortest religious book (Gita) ko ek comment mein summarise kiya hai…๐Ÿ˜›

            October 13, 2013 at 9:57 pm

          • OMG this was interesting!
            An act of cowardliness but sense of duty, love, family bond?
            Both were wise in their own ways, as in Krishna and Arjuna. BUT sacrificing one’s family or friendship isn’t worth a kingdom, is it? Or that is that, puraani kahawat..?
            Thank you for your timely explanation!๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 13, 2013 at 10:29 pm

          • Well… that is why I say Hindu mythology sometimes amazes me๐Ÿ˜‰ Kahani mein bahut saare twists hain…๐Ÿ˜‰

            Agar kabhi time mile aur religious reservations na ho to Mahabharata padhna (ya TV serial dekhna)… Just as a story… Guaranteed Maza aayega… This epic has no real hero and villein… And the story is awesome… makes you think…๐Ÿ™‚

            October 13, 2013 at 11:17 pm

        • Haha hindi after such a long time. Bhavuk hogaye sab๐Ÿ˜›

          October 8, 2013 at 8:26 pm

          • Miss M. I don’t know what bhavuk is!

            October 11, 2013 at 3:07 pm

  6. i see how Urdu has perked everyone up๐Ÿ™‚

    October 8, 2013 at 4:50 pm

  7. It just took me almost half an hour to read the post and the comments altogether…..
    AWESOME !! Itnay keemti Pearls bikhray huay hain is post me kesay samaitun๐Ÿ˜‰ It would be odd to appreciate you people Maria , Arindam and Miss Maqsood…. The post and every comment is a master piece at its own place.
    I would like to participate too…..

    Shehar alag hotay hun gay Mulk alag hotay hun gay
    Per is aarzi had-bandi se Dil tu alag naheen hotay
    Khoon ka rang bhi surkh rehta hai , Safaid naheen ho jata
    Dil aik sath dharakta hai, dour rehnay se koi ghair naheen ho jata
    Dukh tu sab k saanjhay hotay hain, ye deewarain gir jaen gi
    Ansu ponchnay ko hath tu barhao, deewarain kuch na ker paen gi
    Aik jism hai aik hi rooh , Abhi kuch insaaniyat baaki hai
    Ye zulm kernay walay naheen jantay, Allah hamara saathi hai
    Barishain bhi aen gi, shaadmanay bhi bajain gay aik din
    Bus pyar ko thamay rakho, Insaan ‘aik’ hun gay aik din
    Abhi tu No-javanu ne Iqbal ka shaheen banna hai, wo waqt ay ga
    Jab ye simta hua Sehraa aik baar pher zameen pe pahil jaay ga
    Aman ki Bansuri bajaay gi Jab Koi khoon na bahaay ga
    Barishain hun gi , khoub hun gi aur koi dukh tujhe na chuaay ga๐Ÿ™‚

    It was a 5 minutes try so please bear with it๐Ÿ˜› I just wanted to give my try too๐Ÿ˜‰ And I must say You have done a superb job to initiate this discussion๐Ÿ™‚

    October 11, 2013 at 11:45 pm

    • ~ “Khoon ka rang bhi surkh rehta hai , Safaid naheen ho jata
      Dil aik sath dharakta hai, dour rehnay se koi ghair naheen ho jata
      Aik jism hai aik hi rooh , Abhi kuch insaaniyat baaki hai
      Ye zulm kernay walay naheen jantay, Allah hamara saathi hai
      Barishain bhi aen gi, shaadmanay bhi bajain gay aik din
      Bus pyar ko thamay rakho, Insaan โ€˜aikโ€™ hun gay aik din
      Jab ye simta hua Sehraa aik baar pher zameen pe pahil jaay ga
      Aman ki Bansuri bajaay gi Jab Koi khoon na bahaay ga
      Barishain hun gi , khoub hun gi aur koi dukh tujhe na chuaay ga” ~

      Lalarukh!!! (pehly there were about twenty exclamation marks here, then I realized what I was doing.)
      Mera mood kharab tha. Ab I feel awesome. Thank you!
      Glad you too participated, yours is lovely! AMAZING truly. The way you took it, from sehraa to Iqbal to khoon na bahay ga and gham na chowey ga – I can never appreciate you enough.
      To be honest, I didn’t know ye post itna valuable hojaega mery lye. I wasn’t expecting this amazing response, by such amazing writers. (ek tou i wasnt posting this coz its urdu, phir kiya to comments off krdye the, wo kholy to ye sary shaaiir agaye๐Ÿ˜‰ )

      You’re right:
      “Shehar alag hotay hun gay Mulk alag hotay hun gay
      Per is aarzi had-bandi se Dil tu alag naheen hotay”
      *thumbs up* for this ^
      Thank you for your time, and your words, and your visit!

      October 11, 2013 at 11:55 pm

      • “Ye zulm kernay walay naheen jantay, Allah hamara saathi hai
        Barishain bhi aen gi, shaadmanay bhi bajain gay aik din
        Bus pyar ko thamay rakho, Insaan โ€˜aikโ€™ hun gay aik din
        Abhi tu No-javanu ne Iqbal ka shaheen banna hai, wo waqt ay ga”
        Yaar 5 min meib you have written so well, I wonder what could u write if you take time and write sukoon se๐Ÿ™‚

        October 12, 2013 at 1:50 am

      • Haha ! I would have loved those twenty ones๐Ÿ˜›
        Yaar itna b acha nae hai bus tum achi ho isleye tumhain acha lag gya๐Ÿ™‚ It was just a random-thoughts-penning-down-process-of-5-minutes-initiated-by-Maria๐Ÿ˜€ Kuch zada lamba hogya I guess๐Ÿ˜›
        Well bus daikh lu pher tum kitna impressive likhti ho๐Ÿ˜‰
        Thank you so very much for appreciating me and letting me participate on your precious blog !๐Ÿ˜‰ ;Love you !

        October 13, 2013 at 1:04 am

        • Haha here you go:
          ILYM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (No idea kitny, and don’t you count too๐Ÿ˜‰ ..)
          Well han bohaat awesome likhti hun mae, bohaat shukrya apka. Apna credit kabhi na lega. ‘ye to bus random penning down thi’ initiated by maria, thankyou for letting me participate in your ‘precious’ blog’ OMG.๐Ÿ˜€

          Uff Lala, Thank YOU for valuing me with your words bhuiii.
          On a side note:
          Mae soch ke nhi bolti. Tou if you mind anything any day let me know. Theek?

          October 13, 2013 at 1:21 am

          • haaaan better now๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›
            Hahaha na kero yaar ! Me tu new new ae hun writing ki field me tum tu meray se b pehlay se likh rae ho your writings are definitely better than me.
            Araay abi tum soch k nae bolti tu itna acha bolti ho jab soch k bolnay lag jao gi tu pata nae kya hoga๐Ÿ˜› Inqalaab aa jay ga blogging ki duniya me๐Ÿ˜€
            Love you yaar I won’t mind at all anything ever !!๐Ÿ™‚โค

            October 14, 2013 at 9:47 pm

          • Inqilaaaaaab๐Ÿ˜€ Lol Pakistan me ek yehi inqilab reh gya hae ajaega ek din =p
            Glad you don’t mind my stupid harkaten, thank you for always being together!๐Ÿ™‚

            October 14, 2013 at 10:11 pm

          • Haha abi tu baray inqalaab anay hain yaar….daikhna mark my words๐Ÿ˜‰
            And no need to thank me, you are such a sweetheart for always being there for me too๐Ÿ™‚ xx

            October 15, 2013 at 6:13 pm

          • Marked.๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 15, 2013 at 6:17 pm

    • Wah re Urdu! Uff ye Urdu!๐Ÿ™‚

      Itni saari Urdu… Maine to kabhi Urdu padha bhi nahin formally… Bus kisi tarah samajh mein aaya… Bachche ki jaan loge kya? Dekho… don’t force me… warna shuddh hindi shuru kar doonga… Phir lekar baithna hindi to urdu dictionary…

      Waise bahut achchha likha hai tune

      “Abhi tu No-javanu ne Iqbal ka shaheen banna hai, wo waqt ay ga
      Jab ye simta hua Sehraa aik baar pher zameen pe phail jaay ga”

      Loved it!

      “Barishain hun gi , khoub hun gi aur koi dukh tujhe na chuaay ga ”

      Ab aisi baat kar hi di hai to ye sun, continuation mein…

      Aur phir jab baadal garjenge
      Garaj-garaj phir barsenge
      Jab naachega phir se saawan
      Pulkit kar man-van-upvan
      Prafullit ho jab snigdh pawan
      Daurega harshit kar har man
      Tab zanjeerein khul jaayengi
      Deewaren bhi gir jaayengi
      Phir ek honge hamare sheher
      Gaaon nadiyan, sagar, neher
      Ek hogi dil ki aawaaz
      Shanti ka hoga naya aagaaz

      5 mins again!๐Ÿ™‚

      October 13, 2013 at 7:16 pm

      • OMG awesomeeeeeeeee. Ye five minute writers bhi na, I don’t even know how to appreciate them!

        And guess what Arindam?

        Jantay ho kia
        Mery shehar me barish barsi thi!
        Han mery shehar me
        Bonnden giri theen
        Badal bhi garjay the
        Bijli bhi chamki thi
        Ansu bhi tapky the
        Aur qehqahy bhi gonjy the!

        Weeran si basti me
        Kahen jal bujh jal bujh krti
        Roshnian bhi bikhri theen

        Zanjiren bhi toti theen
        Sehra bhi simty the
        Shehar bhi sab jurr gae the
        Nadyan sagar nehren sab
        Akhir mil ke ek hue the

        Ya phir shayad

        Ye phir shayad ek khwab tha ye sab
        Ye khait to sary sookhy haen!
        Nadyan sagar nehren basti
        Kab hi mil paen ge akhir?
        Kia barish waqai barsey gi?
        Kia aansu waqai tapken ge?

        October 13, 2013 at 7:46 pm

        • Okay… This one dedicated to… this ‘real’ virtual family, my wonderful poet friends here, our languages, our culture and this lovely Indo-Pak bond๐Ÿ™‚

          Mujhe to baadal dikhte hain
          Jazbaaton ke, armaanon ke
          Matwaale kadam bhi dikhte hain
          Thirakte us saawan ke

          Dekh ri pagli is baarish ne
          Bhaashaa ke bandhan torr diye
          Alfaazon ki tubandi ne
          Laakhon man jhakjhor diye
          Hindi Urdu Angrezi ne
          In sarhadon ko bhi paar kiya
          Shabdon ki is aandhi ne
          Har deewar par hai waar kiya
          Alag alag in sharahon mein
          Ek saath hai barsaat hui
          Ek sur mein log bole hain
          Ek nazm mein ye baat hui

          Tu dekhna kabhi in baaton ko
          Shabdon ko alfaazon ko
          Har bachcha bachcha gaayega
          Aur isi tarah in mulkon mein
          Shaanti ka paigaam failaayega

          Phir dekhna baarish barsegi
          Khushiyon ke saugaaton ki
          Aur khushi ke aansu tapkenge
          Hum dono ke aankhon se!

          October 13, 2013 at 11:07 pm

          • Oh my GOD!


            “dekh ri pagli is baarish ne
            Bhaashaa ke bandhan torr diye
            Alfaazon ki tubandi ne
            Laakhon man jhakjhor diye
            Hindi Urdu Angrezi ne
            In sarhadon ko bhi paar kiya
            Shabdon ki is aandhi ne
            Har deewar par hai waar kiya
            Alag alag in sharahon mein
            Ek saath hai barsaat hui
            Ek sur mein log bole hain
            Ek nazm mein ye baat hui”

            FANTASTIC!

            Phir dekhna baarish barsegi
            Khushiyon ke saugaaton ki
            Aur khushi ke aansu tapkenge
            Hum dono ke aankhon se!

            I never knew this thread was ever going to become such poetic, where me and you from Pakistan and ‘Bharat’ will come and ‘ek hi nazam me baat krenge’. If there is ‘aman ki asha’ it is this.
            Mega *thumbs-up* for this last latest!

            Ab dekh lia ke toot gaye
            Wo bandhan sary ‘bhasha’ ke
            Wo talwaren bhi nayam me gyeen
            Wo ansu bhi sab sookh gaye
            Kash ke ruk jae sabhi
            Aur na bahey phir khoon kabhi
            Kash ke phir na lahu girey
            Na tapkay phir ansoo koi
            Kash ke aesy hi tham jae
            Wo jang bhi akhir ab ruk jae
            Kash ke phir na nafrat ho
            Kash phir sirf rugbat ho.

            October 13, 2013 at 11:25 pm

          • ๐Ÿ™‚ Wah!

            Ab main kuchh nahin bolunga… Kuchh nahin…

            Waise… recently pata chala ki aap mujhse bhi chhoti hain…๐Ÿ˜› (Zyada nahin but phir bhi…) Itni chhoti umar mein itna talent… Maan gaya yaar!

            And a small query… Who is the great personality who originally said that it was raining?๐Ÿ˜› (refer to the title of the post)

            October 13, 2013 at 11:40 pm

          • Ek minute. Who’s there spilling my age and bio?

            October 13, 2013 at 11:55 pm

          • *secret*…๐Ÿ™‚

            Just kidding… aapke recent post se pata chala… Well comments to be precise… Just observation power…

            Post “Rotten Rose” comment by Paras…
            Concluded that you are a teen

            On my post “Hostel in exam mode” by your comment
            Concluded you have completed pre-engineering
            So you must be in higher side of teen age

            And I am 21…

            So you are younger than me…

            No one is spilling your age or bio

            Offended? Sorry… You may remove the comment… Sorry once again… Didn’t mean to hurt you…๐Ÿ˜ฆ

            October 14, 2013 at 12:08 am

          • Haha people have actually been ‘stalking’!
            I am not removing the comment, nor am I offended. I was just surprised because I don’t think I ever exposed ‘personal info’ before.
            Yeap I am younger than you are.๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 14, 2013 at 12:18 am

          • Stalking? Na jee… Just observation and inference… Nothing else… Science student hoon… Itna to aata hi hai…๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 14, 2013 at 12:49 am

          • Right. ‘Observation and inference’. Physics students can do that.๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 14, 2013 at 12:52 am

          • Yup… Aap bhi to physics (engineering) student hi hain right? Aapse behtar kaun jaanega…๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 14, 2013 at 12:55 am

          • Oye yaar, so sorry again… I shouldn’t have said what I said. Maaf kar dijiye please!

            October 14, 2013 at 12:20 am

          • I didn’t mind it, I said. Why the apology?

            October 14, 2013 at 12:38 am

          • Darr lagta hai yaar… Pata nahi kaun kis baat ka bura maan le…

            October 14, 2013 at 12:46 am

          • Darrtey rehye, achi baat hy.๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 14, 2013 at 12:50 am

          • Apart from that, there were two friends as I mentioned. The ‘Mahwi’ I sent it to had responded with ‘something’ then I wrote her ‘something’ again and after posting it you all came up with so many ‘somethings’ and this finally became a ‘magical piece’ for me.
            Here is what she wrote to me:

            “Zindagi adhuri hae
            Bin tery udasi hae
            Jb kbhi bety lamhe tmko
            Yad aen tou loat aana
            Bhuly basry rastun pe
            Jb kbh chalna tm
            Guzry lamhon ko phir se yad krlena
            Ek yhe wada hae tmse mera —
            Zindagi ke mailun me
            Mjhko bhi rkhna yad
            Sath tou chut’te haen
            Yaden hi baqi rehti hayn
            Un yadon me phir mjhko
            Zinda tm rakhlena.”

            October 14, 2013 at 12:10 am

          • Nice one… But I am confused… isme baarish kahan hai?

            October 14, 2013 at 12:43 am

          • Kaheen nhi.๐Ÿ˜‰ Sirf feelings pour out ho rhi theen.

            October 14, 2013 at 12:50 am

          • ๐Ÿ™‚

            October 14, 2013 at 12:56 am

          • So So Amazing !!

            October 15, 2013 at 5:53 pm

          • Thanks!
            Ye samajh mein aa gaya?๐Ÿ˜›

            Phir bhi let us see…

            Matwaale = Paagal
            Thirakte = Naachte
            Tukbandi (sorry for the typo… I missed the ‘k’) = rhyming

            Anything else?

            October 15, 2013 at 6:18 pm

          • han isme tu samaj aa gya tha except the last one word….
            Nothing else bro ! you already did much๐Ÿ˜›

            October 15, 2013 at 6:32 pm

          • Wow! Really well versed. Hindi took me back to school๐Ÿ˜›

            October 16, 2013 at 6:13 pm

          • Oh! So you had Hindi in school?

            October 16, 2013 at 8:54 pm

          • Indian hoon to lazmi baat hai hindi to be in my syllabus.๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 9:18 pm

          • Oops! *embarrassment* Sorry๐Ÿ˜›

            October 16, 2013 at 9:20 pm

          • I was thinking to tell you phir socha she will tell herself.๐Ÿ˜€

            October 16, 2013 at 9:20 pm

          • I told you not to think much… just act
            Oh! Didn’t I” I should have…

            October 16, 2013 at 9:22 pm

          • Oh didn’t I? I shouldn’t have either! She should๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 16, 2013 at 9:23 pm

          • *sigh* I know…

            October 16, 2013 at 9:26 pm

        • *applauds*

          October 16, 2013 at 10:04 pm

          • Applaud was for your replied poem maria๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 10:09 pm

          • Oh the last ab dekh lia ke toot gaya wali?๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 10:15 pm

      • Haha bus ker yaar hindi ( Artificial wali๐Ÿ˜‰ ) urdu jesi e tu hai ….
        Aur ye tu ne real wali hindi likh k acha nae kia๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› Muje tu koi nae aa rae samaj๐Ÿ˜›
        bus third line tak ae hai samaj….Ab isko translate ker k likh dain please๐Ÿ˜›
        And I salute you for all your five min poetry ! So Impressive.

        October 15, 2013 at 5:46 pm

        • Exactly. Translate krden. Even I don’t know what that hindi word meant that I used in my last poetry. =p

          October 15, 2013 at 5:52 pm

        • OK… Let us see…

          “Saawan” is a month (iconic of monsoon season)
          “Pulkit”, “Prafullit”, “Harshit” all mean Happy
          “Van” means Forest
          “Upvan” means Garden
          “Snigdh” means perfumed or scented
          and
          “Aagaaz” means begining… (this is Urdu I guess)

          Now is it clear? Or you still require the complete translation?

          October 15, 2013 at 6:08 pm

          • Sawan and Aagaaz are known. And it’s clear now, thank you. (atleast to me, Rukh will answer the rest) What’s bhasha??

            October 15, 2013 at 6:10 pm

          • Language… I guess you call it Zubaan in Urdu

            October 15, 2013 at 6:12 pm

          • Oh okay great, thank you!

            October 15, 2013 at 6:17 pm

          • Daantu tu mat๐Ÿ˜›
            Haaan ab samaj me aa gaya๐Ÿ˜›

            October 15, 2013 at 6:31 pm

          • Ab kahan daantaa?

            October 15, 2013 at 6:36 pm

          • You know every comment without a smiley seems like a daant to me๐Ÿ˜›

            October 15, 2013 at 6:36 pm

          • Uff… Is larki ka main kya karoon?

            Maria? Any ideas?

            October 15, 2013 at 6:41 pm

          • Haha no, she likes ‘smileys’ pretty much.

            October 15, 2013 at 6:43 pm

          • Hahaha Is larki ka kuch nae ho sakta๐Ÿ˜› Hopeless case :p

            October 15, 2013 at 6:48 pm

          • My expertise is on hopeless cases๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 15, 2013 at 6:50 pm

          • I want to stay hopeless๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 16, 2013 at 10:31 am

          • Great (y)
            Arindam your ‘expertise’ is to tested then.

            October 16, 2013 at 2:41 pm

          • You would…
            My expertise is to maintain hopelessness in the person๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 16, 2013 at 5:49 pm

          • Ae haey. I got bilawaja ki hope that you’d deal with her and ‘bring her hope’. =p

            October 16, 2013 at 7:30 pm

          • What’s bilawaja?

            October 16, 2013 at 8:47 pm

          • Uh bila waja. Is bina waja. Is without reason. As in ‘I was hopeful you’d deal with her and gift her ‘hope’ because she says she’s hopeless!๐Ÿ˜‰ But you say your expertise is to maintain her hopelessness.๐Ÿ˜€

            October 16, 2013 at 8:50 pm

          • ๐Ÿ˜‰ You see…”Kahani mein TWIST”๐Ÿ˜€

            October 16, 2013 at 8:51 pm

          • Haha right

            October 16, 2013 at 8:53 pm

          • Just as I was about to forget… Eid ka gift?๐Ÿ˜›

            October 16, 2013 at 8:58 pm

          • As in you’re giving one? Sounds great!๐Ÿ˜‰
            But hey, here’s biryani. If the link doesn’t work, trust me I had good intentions!

            October 16, 2013 at 9:06 pm

          • Biryani achchhi thi… Achchha hai… khane ke time pe mil gayi…

            And… MAIN, I mean Arindam Saha, AAPKO, I mean Maria Imran ko GIFT doon?

            OK no problem…๐Ÿ˜› Kya chahiye?

            October 16, 2013 at 9:30 pm

          • Glad you liked. I didn’t cook it.๐Ÿ˜›
            What’s with the gift, itna shock? After all I’m a ‘junior didi’ right?

            October 16, 2013 at 9:35 pm

          • ๐Ÿ˜‰ Nah… You are a ‘friend’… right?๐Ÿ˜‰ But I don’t have any problems with the ‘junior didi’ name๐Ÿ˜›

            Waise poochha to… Kya chaahiye? Jo chaahe Wo milega…๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 16, 2013 at 9:39 pm

          • Jo ap khushi se den!๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 10:24 pm

          • Presenting…. “Narkel er Naaru”๐Ÿ™‚ Badi mehnat se dhoondha hai๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 10:50 pm

          • Haha nice. Bengali dish? Thank you!

            October 16, 2013 at 10:54 pm

          • Yup… literally means “A sweet made of coconut”๐Ÿ™‚
            (Bengal is famous for its sweet dishes and fish… want some fish?)

            October 16, 2013 at 10:57 pm

          • I have had enough ‘bakray ka gosht’ today๐Ÿ˜‰ But I’ll love fish anyway๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 10:58 pm

          • Naam image par likha hai… Sambhal ke khaayiega… Bahut kaante hote hain, aur bahut taste bhi๐Ÿ™‚

            October 16, 2013 at 11:05 pm

          • It does look tasty!๐Ÿ˜€

            October 16, 2013 at 11:07 pm

          • Fridge mein rakh dein agar pet bharaa ho to… Kal kha lijiyega๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 16, 2013 at 11:18 pm

          • *thumbs up*๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 15, 2013 at 6:54 pm

          • Exactly, daanta kahan?๐Ÿ˜›

            October 15, 2013 at 6:36 pm

  8. Bhavuk = emotional๐Ÿ™‚

    October 12, 2013 at 6:11 pm

  9. rjl2727

    this one requires a good bit of thought, which i suppose is it’s value

    October 18, 2013 at 6:59 am

    • This one was an Urdu poetry, written for a friend.๐Ÿ™‚ And posting it resulted in the on-spot creation of a number of poems from other Indian and Pakistani writers making it a very memorable experience for myself! =)

      October 18, 2013 at 7:19 pm

  10. A small token of appreciation for the days of endless poetry

    http://whenintrovertspeaks.wordpress.com/baarishein-hongi-zaroor-hongi/

    October 22, 2013 at 7:52 am

    • I wanted to do that! But I couldn’t have done it any better! Thank you SO much Arindam, it means a lot!

      October 22, 2013 at 1:56 pm

      • Any possible improvements on the titles of the ‘Threads’?
        I have still not finalized the post… So any suggestions are welcome…

        October 22, 2013 at 1:59 pm

      • Or the title?

        October 22, 2013 at 2:00 pm

        • I think it’s perfect the way it is.

          October 22, 2013 at 2:01 pm

          • Oops… I forgot to give your link… Doing it now…๐Ÿ™‚

            I was also planning to collect all my ‘response poems’… as pages on my blog… So I wanted your permission for those on your blog… What say?

            October 22, 2013 at 2:06 pm

          • You could also link White Pearl and Miss Maqsood’s blog.
            And your poems are your poems! Why would I not permit?๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 2:10 pm

          • Yup… Will do that…

            Because currently my poems are currently lying as comments on your blog…๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 22, 2013 at 2:13 pm

          • I know, and that is pretty ungrateful on my side.๐Ÿ˜ฆ But I have got a post lined up for some in-response poems though I was waiting for graphics.
            There’s an image waiting to be posted when I re-blog this post of yours.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›

            October 22, 2013 at 2:19 pm

          • Sorry… didn’t get you๐Ÿ˜ฆ๐Ÿ˜›

            October 22, 2013 at 2:22 pm

          • I mean to say, that it’s pretty ungrateful of me that all those amazing in-response poems are currently lying as comments only. I wanted to post them but was so caught up, and wanted to design some images to suit them, therefore it took a long time.

            October 22, 2013 at 2:25 pm

          • Oh… Yeh bhi koi ungratefulness hai?
            Aapka jab man chaahe post kar dena… (if at all you want to post them)

            I am collecting them for my record only… (pataa nahin kab dost bichhar jaayen… tab un poems ko padh ke yaad kar liya karoonga :))

            Aur aise bhi… I will keep them as pages and not posts

            October 22, 2013 at 2:32 pm

          • Exactly. Kab ye blog delete hojae aur baarishen ruk jaen.๐Ÿ˜‰
            P.S. My comments are all going in spam. :S Those on other blogs. What do I do?

            October 22, 2013 at 2:35 pm

          • Uh… problem… Same problem occurred a few more of my friends (including Lala)…

            So…

            1. Che if you have approved any spam comment…
            2. Report to the ‘Akismet’ spam blocker… I mean write email… For Lala they took a three odd days (ya… that’s sad)
            3. If those don’t work… tab dekhenga kya hota hai… Bataiyega… aapko ek jugaad bataaunga๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 22, 2013 at 2:43 pm

          • I haven’t approved one lately out of spam, but I have put some there from my approved ones. As in some pingbacks.
            Mery pas sab comments arahe haen, dosron ke paas mery not going.๐Ÿ˜ฆ

            October 22, 2013 at 2:48 pm

          • I know… same problem as hers…
            Lodge a complaint… Phir dekhte hain

            If you want to contact me anytime… you can mail me๐Ÿ™‚

            I know situations can become annoying…

            October 22, 2013 at 2:52 pm

          • Annoying yep. And thank you! I’ll try to lodge a complaint. =)

            October 22, 2013 at 2:59 pm

          • I tried to confirm that I received your notification BUT that went in spam too! How awesome is that? I won’t even tell anybody now to check there. If I am in spam, there I’ll remain.๐Ÿ˜ฆ

            October 22, 2013 at 3:39 pm

          • Write a post na… Your post will not be spammed…
            Emailed to Akismet?

            October 22, 2013 at 3:41 pm

          • Not emailed yet..

            October 22, 2013 at 3:43 pm

          • So do it… you lazy person!๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜› (Kidding)

            Meanwhile I unspammed your response

            October 22, 2013 at 3:46 pm

          • I wanted to tell you myself what a lazy person I am, but you guessed it too!๐Ÿ™‚ Yeah, I’ll write a post. I’ll email them too. I’ll do it some time.๐Ÿ˜›

            October 22, 2013 at 3:48 pm

          • Mujhe pataa hai…๐Ÿ˜› Observation power again…๐Ÿ˜‰

            And look in this link too… if you get any help

            http://foodpeopleloveandstuff.wordpress.com/2013/08/15/please-look-into-your-spam-folders-to-read-my-comments/

            October 22, 2013 at 3:56 pm

          • Lol okay.๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 3:57 pm

          • I can exactly copy-paste Lala’s post, right? Or is that plagiarism?๐Ÿ˜›

            October 22, 2013 at 3:58 pm

          • You know the answer right? But still… to formally answer your question… that is plagiarism…. Aalsi!๐Ÿ˜›

            Read the comments there

            And I am going offline for a couple of hours (classes)… So if any help is required from me… wait for sometime…๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 4:05 pm

          • Sure!๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 4:07 pm

          • It got solved out khud se!๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 6:02 pm

          • Great!
            What was the problem?

            October 22, 2013 at 6:03 pm

          • I don’t know but I think I am seeing my comments now. Probably after you un-spammed and one other blogger did too, phir it got alright.

            October 22, 2013 at 6:05 pm

          • ๐Ÿ™‚ Great!
            Party! Aap to de dijiye… Lala ne to nahin diya tha…๐Ÿ˜‰

            October 22, 2013 at 6:07 pm

          • เฆงเฆจเงเฆฏเฆฌเฆพเฆฆ ! =p

            October 22, 2013 at 6:08 pm

          • ๐Ÿ˜€ Woh to theek hai… but… kaam ki baat yeh hai ki meri party kahaan hai?

            October 22, 2013 at 6:11 pm

          • Uhm. Party. uhh how do we give an online party?

            October 22, 2013 at 6:16 pm

          • Real party… not online…๐Ÿ˜‰
            Come to Kolkata๐Ÿ˜‰ and we shall see๐Ÿ˜›

            Anyways… Congrats and Happy Blogging๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 6:21 pm

          • You want party na? Come to Karachi and we’ll have loads of fun.๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜›
            And thanks.

            October 22, 2013 at 6:25 pm

          • Aaunga kabhi…
            Waise aap mere blog per guest ban ke kab aa rahi hain?

            October 22, 2013 at 6:29 pm

          • Inshaa Allah someday soon. =p
            โ€˜Inscribed within a wordโ€™…. I have got to think.

            October 22, 2013 at 6:36 pm

          • Think Think…

            One curiosity… What does Insha Allah mean?

            October 22, 2013 at 6:44 pm

          • If God wills.

            October 22, 2013 at 6:45 pm

          • Okay… thanks…๐Ÿ™‚

            October 22, 2013 at 6:48 pm

          • No problem!:)

            October 22, 2013 at 6:50 pm

          • And… occasionally try karte rahiye… If the problem is resolved… (well that was obvious)

            One more point… the problem may arise also from the fact that someone has spammed your comment (by mistake) and from then on wards the spam detector regards all your comments as spam… (WP ke time pe kisi forum pe padha tha)

            So you could write a post urging the people to unspam any of your comments which are in the spam folder…

            October 22, 2013 at 2:50 pm

          • Ahaan. Okay. They’re insane.

            October 22, 2013 at 2:52 pm

  11. WordsFallFromMyEyes

    I put this into google translate but it didn’t translate. Strange. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

    October 31, 2013 at 7:28 am

    • Aw I am so sorry for that! Thank you for your interest though. I’ll hopefully translate this one soon and either post it on my blog or email it to you.๐Ÿ™‚

      October 31, 2013 at 6:57 pm

  12. miss.mysterious

    Hawh๐Ÿ˜ฆ
    Very well written!

    June 16, 2015 at 9:55 pm

    • Shukriya!๐Ÿ™‚ Was reading this a while ago myself. All them cross-border, cross-city memories.

      June 16, 2015 at 11:26 pm

      • miss.mysterious

        Nahi aap ka shukriya kai aapnai itnee achee poem share kee. ๐Ÿ™‚
        It really makes me think about Pak!

        June 17, 2015 at 1:09 am

        • ๐Ÿ™‚
          Can I ask somethinggg? *already asking* You don’t live here, right? Saudi Arabia?

          June 20, 2015 at 10:09 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            What makes you say that ?๐Ÿ˜›

            June 20, 2015 at 10:30 pm

          • Matlab yes? :p

            June 20, 2015 at 10:34 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            Pahlai aap batain na what made you think that?๐Ÿ˜„

            June 20, 2015 at 10:36 pm

          • I have some good skills Alhamdulillah..

            June 20, 2015 at 10:36 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            Alhamdulilah
            Yep๐Ÿ˜› I’m in KSA. :3
            You guessed because of 7bbty?๐Ÿ˜›

            June 20, 2015 at 10:38 pm

          • No. :p I have site stats which show views country-wise.๐Ÿ˜„ City poochun?

            June 20, 2015 at 10:41 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            Oh yeah I forgot about that๐Ÿ˜„
            Nai๐Ÿ˜› jab aap milnai aaye ga to poochia ga zaroor๐Ÿ˜€
            Mai chepak gai hoon blog pai to ziadatar KSA bhara hoga is liye aheheh๐Ÿ˜„

            June 20, 2015 at 10:42 pm

          • That’s so bad. Bus sahee hy. *sniffs*

            (Lol lots from there. I love that.) xD

            June 20, 2015 at 10:46 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            Nahi hai bad๐Ÿ˜› *hand a tissue to 7elwa*

            Glad you do mai aaj kal blogs hee parh rahee hoon๐Ÿ˜›

            June 20, 2015 at 10:47 pm

          • Hae bad. Mai hart broke lyk dis <//3.

            Mae aj kal blogs nahi likh rahi though I'm on vacations too. When I posted the last one tab tou exams bhi horahy the aur ab farigh hun to kuch hae hi nahi. xD

            June 20, 2015 at 10:51 pm

    • miss.mysterious

      Haw how sad agar <I3 yoon kar kai tootta to bata daytee๐Ÿ˜„
      Yeah I noticed mai qadeem tareen blog posts pai comment kar rahee hoon๐Ÿ˜„ lekin bohat maza aaraha hai!
      Likhiye na warna mai aapko BAJI kahna shoro kardoonge๐Ÿ˜„

      June 20, 2015 at 10:54 pm

      • Haha what a threat mashaAllah. Nahi nahi don’t call me BAJI, I will write. :3 Remember in prayers.โค

        June 20, 2015 at 10:57 pm

        • miss.mysterious

          B/
          Yus!๐Ÿ˜€
          Yes I did remember you and will. In Sha Allah!
          Aap say bhi duaoon kee guzarish hai,Maria. ^.^

          June 20, 2015 at 10:59 pm

          • Aw thank you. So much! And, sure.๐Ÿ™‚

            (But if Allah asks me your name, I’ll have to say it’s a mystery)๐Ÿ˜‰

            June 20, 2015 at 11:01 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            Welcome ^.^
            Awh no prob yara๐Ÿ˜› a mystery to you not to Him.
            He looks at the intention :3 JazakAllahKhair!
            Chalain ab aap dosree comments parlain phir mai aur comment karongee๐Ÿ˜„

            June 21, 2015 at 12:33 am

          • Barakillah!
            Was reading your frn’s comments just now.๐Ÿ˜‰ And I replied to your email some time ago. Just so you know:)

            June 21, 2015 at 12:51 am

          • miss.mysterious

            Ohkay๐Ÿ˜€ about 5 seconds ago I replied to your email :3

            June 21, 2015 at 12:55 am

          • miss.mysterious

            I really felt happy when I read it. I grinned the BIG grin!๐Ÿ˜€
            To be honest,I was a bit shy of whether or not I should comment on your blog….
            because I thought you might be like where did I pop out from and I don’t even blog!

            Before my first comment I had already read alot of your posts๐Ÿ˜€ and I still am reading :3 and lovin it.
            Keep writing ^.^

            June 21, 2015 at 1:00 am

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