Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

YOU.

4-flowers-palette-knife-paintingsYou complete puzzles
In ways unknown, you’re special
The reason I live.

‘Hiking with Haiku’ ~ Format: 5-7-5 poetry ~ Haiku #2 ~ Randomly Abstract

Update January 17th, 2014: Show us ‘YOU’.

32 responses

  1. rjl2727

    aha, 5-7-5 – i get it this time. and whoever “you” is, most fortunate!

    October 22, 2013 at 1:25 am

  2. And for whom this lovely lines are written..😉

    October 22, 2013 at 2:53 am

    • For a strangely stranger.😉

      October 22, 2013 at 3:23 pm

      • rjl2727

        strangely stranger??

        October 22, 2013 at 3:26 pm

      • Oh I see..😀
        I wonder so lovely lines for strangely stranger then How lovely the lines will be for your dear ones…😀

        October 22, 2013 at 3:32 pm

        • They’ll be blank pages!

          October 22, 2013 at 3:46 pm

          • Hmm Why So?
            It reminds me of a Hindi Song– “Mera Jeevan Kora Kaagaz Kora hi reh gaya”
            But I believe the blank will be invisible love..😀

            October 22, 2013 at 3:48 pm

          • Haha what a reminder!

            October 22, 2013 at 3:52 pm

  3. “precious things come in small packets”, you prove this with your Haiku hikes.
    God bless!

    October 22, 2013 at 8:28 am

    • Aw thank you so much Pamela! Your comments keep me motivated.🙂

      October 22, 2013 at 1:50 pm

  4. Me?! Awww that’s sooo special :’)😛
    Darken the background a bit, btw. Of the image, I mean.

    October 22, 2013 at 9:34 am

    • Han you. Of course.😉
      Background on purpose, I know the text isn’t prominent. It doesn’t has to be that!

      October 22, 2013 at 1:45 pm

  5. Ahem ahem🙂 Good one again🙂 Beshtu

    October 22, 2013 at 3:18 pm

  6. So charmful . . .
    You complete puzzles
    In ways unknown, you’re special
    The reason I live.

    October 23, 2013 at 4:15 pm

  7. That is so uniquely written🙂

    That is why I nominated you for Versatile blogger award. I hope you’ll accept🙂
    http://lifeconfusions.wordpress.com/2013/10/22/versatile-blogger/

    October 23, 2013 at 10:48 pm

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