EXPRESS YOURSELF
says the daily prompt
That’s totally impossible!
Cried the girl and stomped
Tell us about it
They repeat again
What am i to say?
her protests go in vain
tell us about a time
you had no words to say
Well that happens a lot!
with my senses do they play
Tell us, tell us, do they call
Tell us about it, tell us all
Fine then I shall, so said her
and unveil here some moments blur
But listen to me with heart brave
Cautions she with a sound grave
I’ll tell you about that time last..
her eyes surveying parts of past
I’ll open to you each hint, imprint..
Her mind throbbing, as she squint
I’ll tell you, I’ll tell you
suddenly she screams
Rubbing her clenched fist
In emotions extreme
I’ll explain to you such happenings
of haunting nights and mornings
I’ll tell you, I’ll tell each and all
shouts she, before she stumbles and falls
Her pattering heart skips fast a beat
thud and thump as she dropped on feet
Whimpering, limping, she strives to stand
a hand advanced, she couldn’t withstand
You never came forward, you never helped out
she looked blankly, eyes filled with doubt
Weren’t you the same to ask her speak?
where are you now as she dies, weak?
Didn’t you ask her to express, to try?
but you’re nowhere close to stop her cry
You’ve gone because you had come to go
It will take time yes, I’ll get this though
just make sure you never ask another to ‘express’
for it’s harder than you know, to speak or confess.
In response to the Daily Prompt: Express Yourself
“Tell us about a time you couldn’t quite get your words or images to express what you wanted to express. What do you think the barrier was? For bonus points, try again.
Photographers, artists, poets: show us EXPRESSION.”
Excellent. You expressed yourself well… though maybe shouldn’t have, given the task! 🙂
Thanks a dozen, friend! 🙂
And yes, true.
i think a poem’s merit is largely based on how the reader experiences the emotion of the writer. this piece does that and more!! the rising angst is highly palpable. amazing, tough, sad, outstanding!!!!
Hey thank you very much. It’s quite an accomplishment for the writer if her written word successfully creates that feeling for the reader’s eye. Glad you liked.
well, what can i say? you have a natural gift. great job.
Thank you again, your appreciation humbles me.
ok – one last thought, then i’ll give it a rest. the concept of expression is a kinda funny. it is an extremely rare person that truly receives and treasures our expression. nearly every other person in our lives may ask for “expression”, but really mean and want “explanation”. so if you ever find a friend that does not require explanation, well don’t pass by.
You’re right.
Rarely does a person really mean to receive what he asks for, or treasure ‘expression’ without ‘explanation’.
and so are you right. seems no matter what, there is always some string attached that turns into a chain. is there such a thing as friendship or love without eventually bleeding one another out? in my dreams it exists, but i don’t know where else.
A part of me says there is, a part says it can never be.
i know, i know. hence the pain, always.
All ways, always.
right and right. i’ve grown to expect nothing else, but i will wish for you something far better.
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Very well expressed. 🙂
Thank you. 🙂
A waterfall of words..
Splendid!
Thanks Pamela!..
You’ve gone because you had come to go
It will take time yes, I’ll get this though
just make sure you never ask another to ‘express’
for it’s harder than you know, to speak or confess…..
LOVED IT!!
I loved it too. 😉
Haha no, thank you so much!
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WEREN’T YOU THE SAME TO ASK HER SPEAK?
WHERE ARE YOU NOW AS SHE DIES, WEAK?
DIDN’T YOU ASK HER TO EXPRESS, TO TRY?
BUT YOU’RE NOWHERE CLOSE TO STOP HER CRY
YOU’VE GONE BECAUSE YOU HAD COME TO GO
IT WILL TAKE TIME YES, I’LL GET THIS THOUGH
JUST MAKE SURE YOU NEVER ASK ANOTHER TO ‘EXPRESS’
FOR IT’S HARDER THAN YOU KNOW, TO SPEAK OR CONFESS.
Top Class 🙂
Thanks!! 🙂
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Total freedom of expression! Love this.
Thank you Shanice! I am so glad you enjoyed reading it. (=
Amazing and absolutely gripping! You have a special gift of expressing emotions strongly in your poetry! Very well written!
Thanks a million for your kind comments! I am very glad that you enjoyed reading this. =)
Beautiful flow of free expression. So much emotional release. Thank you for sharing!!
Thank You for reading, and for leaving such wonderful comments. =)
Loved this one too ! So impressively written.
Thanks! (=
how your words changed in two years
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