YOU will be there, and WE together Some place in paradise; a lovely weather PRESENT to be present, and present rejoiced FUTURE to be discovered not now, later. Life be lived with hopes and DREAMS No pain stays FOREVER, however it seems
RAINBOW follows dark clouds, at both extremes!
Inspired by The Daily Prompt: SEVEN WONDERS.
Khalil Gibran once said that people will never understand one another unless language is reduced to seven words. What would your seven words be?
Photographers, artists, poets: show us SEVEN.
About my rainbow:
The poem consists of seven lines. Each line consists of seven words. The seven words highlighted in the text are the seven words that I chose, and it’s a rainbow because a rainbow denotes ‘seven’.
YOU. WE. PRESENT. FUTURE. DREAMS. FOREVER. RAINBOW
Note that there is no I .
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Show: Seven colors- Roy G BiV.
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This is amazing with Seven Words and the Words you choosed are extremely positive..Loved it.. 😀
Thank you Harsha! 🙂
Great one! 🙂
Thanks Paras! 🙂
Pleasure Maria 🙂
simply, its lovely!! 😉
Simply, Shukriiya! 🙂
no words to say. . .
Amazing… Superb… One of the best I have ever read!
Fantastic…
You told me not to ‘thank’, so I will say that I am pretty pleased to know you liked it! 🙂
Nice workaround 😛
Interesting list.
Thank you!
Lovely shuffle of words:) Inspired as alwayz:)
Hey thanks! You made my day:)
This is a lovely little idea….Love it. Your seven words are so beautiful…..You can make people understand anything with these ! Love this try.
Thanks! Glad you loved them.. 🙂
My seven words because these are always whirring in my heart and mind: “Love and peace to all of you.”
They’re lovely! 🙂 Love and peace, they’re the most anybody can give to another.
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A really lovely example of a ‘concrete poem’ !
Lovely thought, shape and colour !
Beautiful effect. One of the best I’ve seen so far. Precise and compact withe sense as well, not to mention colour ! Cheers !
Oh, thank you so much!! ♥
Lovelay!
Thank youu. 😀
Its me again Maria anyway..
If you remember can you tell me what font style is that in the pic? :3
Had to search a good while for this. 😛 It’s Good foot on Pixlr.
You didnt have to go search :p
But thnx ^.^
Np. 🙂 I’ nice like that. xD