Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

RAINBOW

myrainbowYOU will be there, and WE together
Some place in paradise; a lovely weather
PRESENT to be present, and present rejoiced
FUTURE to be discovered not now, later.
 
Life be lived with hopes and DREAMS
No pain stays FOREVER, however it seems
 
RAINBOW follows dark clouds, at both extremes!

marsiInspired by The Daily Prompt: SEVEN WONDERS.

Khalil Gibran once said that people will never understand one another unless language is reduced to seven words. What would your seven words be?

Photographers, artists, poets: show us SEVEN.

About my rainbow:

The poem consists of seven lines. Each line consists of seven words. The seven words highlighted in the text are the seven words that I chose, and it’s a rainbow because a rainbow denotes ‘seven’.
YOU. WE. PRESENT. FUTURE. DREAMS. FOREVER. RAINBOW

Note that there is no I .

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Show: Seven colors- Roy G BiV.

44 responses

  1. This is amazing with Seven Words and the Words you choosed are extremely positive..Loved it..😀

    October 28, 2013 at 10:27 pm

  2. Great one!🙂

    October 28, 2013 at 10:27 pm

  3. simply, its lovely!!😉

    October 28, 2013 at 10:50 pm

  4. rjl2727

    no words to say. . .

    October 28, 2013 at 11:43 pm

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  13. Amazing… Superb… One of the best I have ever read!
    Fantastic…

    October 29, 2013 at 8:12 am

    • You told me not to ‘thank’, so I will say that I am pretty pleased to know you liked it!🙂

      October 29, 2013 at 3:19 pm

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  15. Interesting list.

    October 29, 2013 at 7:45 pm

  16. Lovely shuffle of words:) Inspired as alwayz:)

    October 30, 2013 at 4:30 pm

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  18. This is a lovely little idea….Love it. Your seven words are so beautiful…..You can make people understand anything with these ! Love this try.

    November 11, 2013 at 10:07 pm

  19. Rexie

    My seven words because these are always whirring in my heart and mind: “Love and peace to all of you.”

    November 25, 2013 at 7:01 am

    • They’re lovely!🙂 Love and peace, they’re the most anybody can give to another.

      November 25, 2013 at 6:19 pm

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  25. Reblogged this on Seamless Writing and commented:
    A really lovely example of a ‘concrete poem’ !
    Lovely thought, shape and colour !

    February 21, 2015 at 7:42 pm

  26. Beautiful effect. One of the best I’ve seen so far. Precise and compact withe sense as well, not to mention colour ! Cheers !

    February 21, 2015 at 7:44 pm

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  28. miss.mysterious

    Lovelay!

    June 16, 2015 at 2:29 pm

    • Thank youu.😀

      June 16, 2015 at 7:08 pm

      • miss.mysterious

        Its me again Maria anyway..
        If you remember can you tell me what font style is that in the pic? :3

        June 16, 2015 at 9:04 pm

        • Had to search a good while for this.😛 It’s Good foot on Pixlr.

          June 16, 2015 at 10:01 pm

          • miss.mysterious

            You didnt have to go search :p
            But thnx ^.^

            June 16, 2015 at 10:40 pm

          • Np.🙂 I’ nice like that. xD

            June 16, 2015 at 11:25 pm

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