Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

The first letter of my poetry,
and the last-
and the very last word
the first, the last, the second, third, fourth
and all that follow,
all that exist
that I breathe,
all that dance, those dancing words!
the first after first, the last before last

is YOU.

youu

42 responses

  1. I love this

    November 13, 2013 at 10:41 pm

  2. “the first after first, the last before last
    is YOU….”
    Very powerful…🙂

    November 14, 2013 at 11:14 am

    • Thank you.

      November 16, 2013 at 12:39 am

      • Thank you wali madam… where’re you…?
        Pardon my informality…🙂

        November 16, 2013 at 12:45 am

        • Acha if I don’t pardon, phir kiya hoga?🙂

          Well, I’ve no idea where. Having my winter sleep, with irregular wake-up times in-between. Thank you for asking.🙂

          November 16, 2013 at 1:28 am

          • Then, I guess, I would have to write you another poem… I’m sorry… I don’t know any other language…🙂
            Is it bad to confess, that asking of you was a selfish act… I wanted to interact and have your feedback…

            November 16, 2013 at 10:39 am

          • Being honest couldn’t (shouldn’t) ever be considered bad.🙂
            I’ve read all your posts, from those management tips to groceries, and Annabel Lee, but I guess I’m too out of words to come and appreciate your superb skills. But be sure that I soon will.🙂

            November 16, 2013 at 1:52 pm

          • I guess I always do and would continue to… appreciate
            and eagerly wait for your next “honest” announcement.🙂
            I hope current winter’s cherishing you like an old bracelet.
            As first sunshine of the day, caresses the face like a warm velvet.
            (my apologies…)

            November 16, 2013 at 2:23 pm

          • My God. Why do people have to apologize after every nice line? Thank you anyways.🙂

            November 16, 2013 at 2:39 pm

  3. It’s so attempting to give it a try to poetry after reading this.
    Well, what the heck, I’m going to write one for sure.🙂

    November 14, 2013 at 12:04 pm

  4. YOU are amazing..! YOU write beautifully!!🙂

    November 14, 2013 at 8:47 pm

    • Thank you.
      Rabia is ko ishq-e-haqiqi me rakh ke dekho? I hope you’ll like it better.🙂

      November 15, 2013 at 12:42 pm

  5. rjl2727

    beautiful piece. I’m glad you are writing again.

    November 14, 2013 at 10:17 pm

    • Thank you

      November 16, 2013 at 8:20 pm

      • rjl2727

        yea, don’t be a stranger. i’ve missed conversing with you.

        November 16, 2013 at 8:51 pm

        • It’s not that. I’m just too sleepy during November, remember? How’s your student doing?🙂

          November 16, 2013 at 9:05 pm

          • rjl2727

            very good thank you. and as he says to me every time he sees me, even if i’ve only been out of the room for 10 minutes, “i missed you”

            November 16, 2013 at 9:15 pm

          • 🙂 He sure is quite attached to his counselor.

            November 16, 2013 at 9:22 pm

          • rjl2727

            yes, i don’t know what i did to win his favor, but it is much better than last year when he would become so violent. he is a pussy cat these days. thanks for your concern

            November 16, 2013 at 9:31 pm

  6. Very well written Maria….. You have played perfectly with the words !

    November 15, 2013 at 12:11 am

  7. November khatam nahi huaaaa lagta hai aaapke yahan hogaya khatam😛
    Oh Do I have to say “very well written”? Bolne ki zaroorat nahi hai you write brilliantly.🙂

    November 15, 2013 at 12:45 am

    • Bt cheesy hai😛

      November 15, 2013 at 12:45 am

    • Acha Hyderabad me nahi hua? Karachi is faster, you know.😛
      Thank you, han ofcourse bolny ki zaroorat hy. Mjhy yaqeen nhi aega na, islye.:/

      Cheesy hae? Haha. Um, read my comment to rabia above.

      November 16, 2013 at 3:11 pm

  8. Wow! Lovely🙂

    November 16, 2013 at 8:13 pm

  9. Love ittttt

    November 17, 2013 at 12:03 am

  10. Makes for a great love letter in a card for that someone special. Very nice stuff.

    November 18, 2013 at 2:32 pm

  11. This is absolutely beautiful!!

    -Mari

    November 23, 2013 at 1:55 am

    • Thank you Mari, for stopping by and appreciating the post. (: I hope you’re doing perfect, have a nice day!

      November 24, 2013 at 2:30 pm

  12. So strong and powerful !
    One of your best works Maria !🙂

    November 24, 2013 at 12:11 pm

  13. Such sweet heartfelt words..🙂

    November 25, 2013 at 12:10 am

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