Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

kaghaz_kishtiکاغز کی کشتی تھی
جو ھم نے مل کر بنائی تھی
اسے پانی میں چلتا دیکھ کر
کیسے خوش ھوجاتے تھے
بہت سے خواب تھے
جو ھم نے مل کر سجائے تھے
جاگتی انکھوں سے۔۔
جنھیں پورا کرنے کی
تم نے قسم کھائی تھی
بیت سے راز تھے میرے
جو بطور امانت
تمھارے پاس رکھوائے تھے
ایسے راز
جنکی بھنک دنیا میں
کسی دوسرے کو نھیں۔
پھر کیوں؟

24 responses

  1. Reminds me of a poem my bhanja used to sing when he was chhota-er… It’s beautiful, though I get that it’s not supposed to be…
    And I wonderrr……………………………..
    Who it addresses?…

    January 14, 2014 at 9:59 pm

    • :’)
      Addresses nobody in specific, but anyone who could relate.
      Thank youuu.

      January 15, 2014 at 6:49 pm

  2. fir kyun, phr kyun phir kyun? aah! ek aisa sawaal jis ka jawaab koi nai dayta,,,,,,,
    nicely written, emotionally beautiful…

    January 14, 2014 at 10:28 pm

    • Haena? Exactly. Aesa sawaal jiska jawaab koi nhi deta. Thank you SO much Aiman, glad you liked it.🙂

      January 15, 2014 at 6:32 pm

  3. Reminds me of ‘Wo kaghaz ki kashti wo barish ka paani’ by jagjit singh.
    Lovely Maria…..Memories and “What if’s” ! And questions…. They kill us.

    January 14, 2014 at 10:58 pm

    • I second this…It reminded me as well of Kaghaz ki Kashti!
      Lovely🙂

      January 14, 2014 at 11:41 pm

      • Well I agree with ladies, Kagaz ki Kashti is kinda obvious hook.
        But in essence I found it more inclining towards Gulzar saheb’s “Mera Kuch Samaan” from great Indian parallel cinema film: “Ijaazat”.🙂
        The way you’re recalling the past, way you’re referencing the images of moments by-gone, and way there’s an underlying state a grievance and you ask a question. Similarities are stark.
        If this is a coincidence, it’s nothing less than a magic. If it’s not, then it’s nothing less than a wonderful tribute.🙂

        January 15, 2014 at 3:01 am

    • Hmm. What if’s and questions and memories, they do haunt quite much. Glad you liked my kaawish!🙂 The image in the post is what inspired me. And yupp ‘wo kaghiz ki kashti wo baarish ka paani’❤

      Have you read Bachpan ka December?

      January 15, 2014 at 6:22 pm

      • Oh Yes I’ve read it and I completely LOVE it ! Bohat acha hai…specially the ending and those army training days of his life.

        January 15, 2014 at 6:24 pm


        • I had that in mind. A part of it.
          And yupp, bht acha hy.🙂

          January 15, 2014 at 6:30 pm

  4. Ap ki tu Urdu bhi achi hay, ak achi nazm hay ye.
    Blog main kabhi kabhi Urdu ka taRka lagta rahay tu acha hay na!

    January 15, 2014 at 12:22 pm

  5. Hello! I love your blog so much, I’ve nominated you for the 2013 Blog of the Year Award! Please accept it with my congratulations and appreciation at: http://aishasoasis.wordpress.com/about/

    January 15, 2014 at 9:21 pm

  6. Phir kyun?
    Phir kyun wo naav aakhir doob gaye?
    Phir kyun wo dariyah sookh gayaa?
    Phir kyun wo sapne toot gaye?
    Phir kyun wo raaz aakhir khul gaya?

    Chale to the do naav saath us chhor se
    Phir kyun manjhdhaar mein ek naav chhot gaya?

    ————————————————————————

    chhor = kinaaraa
    manjhdhaar = opposite of kinaraa; nadi ke beech mein
    ————————————————————————-

    Yahi poochh rahin thin na aap?😛
    Translate kar detin… jaldi samajh jaata🙂

    January 16, 2014 at 2:05 pm

    • Aah. Awesome. (Y)

      “Phir kyun wo naav aakhir doob gaye?
      Phir kyun wo raaz aakhir khul gaya?
      Chale to the do naav saath us chhor se
      Phir kyun manjhdhaar mein ek naav chhot gaya”

      Manjhdaar I know, shukrya for the addition. Question waheen reh gya.😉

      January 16, 2014 at 6:46 pm

      • Question mujhse poochha tha kya?

        P.S. Agli baar se agar translate nahin kiya na… to hate mails aayenge aap ko…😛

        January 16, 2014 at 7:39 pm

        • Haha. Nhi, apse nahi pucha tha. But sawaal, sawaal reh gya. Jawaab nhi milta. =p
          Lol fan mails nhi then hate mails sahee.😛 ^_^

          January 16, 2014 at 8:37 pm

          • Matlab… aap nahin sudhroge😛

            January 17, 2014 at 10:17 am

          • Lol ek hate mail ke baad se har dafa I’ll translate. ^_^

            January 17, 2014 at 9:36 pm

          • Huh…😦

            January 18, 2014 at 9:18 am

  7. خوبصورت نظم

    January 29, 2014 at 1:04 am

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