You & I.

You and I are like stars in the sky; close, yet far apart. Like organs in a body where pumps one same heart, or veins beneath a skin supplying red to each part.

You and I are like notes in a melody, homogeneous colors in a beautiful piece of art. A verse and a lyric, a source and a spirit, tear in an eye, you are the reason why.

You and I are like birds in a flight, serene and quiet, an enchanting sight. We are pages of a book; differently typed; we are patterns of a cloth, circled and striped.

We are crests and troughs of a wave unique, seekers we are of the Great Mystique. Pleasant fragrances of flowers pink and blue, we are the two, tiny droplets of dew.

Image: Byron Jorjorian


56 thoughts on “You & I.

  1. Soumyajit Pradhan says:

    Good.. especially:
    “We are crests and troughs of a wave unique, seekers we are of the Great Mystique. Pleasant fragrances of flowers pink and blue, we are the two, tiny droplets of dew.”

  2. lifeconfusions says:

    Yar ye kya chakkar hy? Banda itni ache poetry to tab he likhta hy jab… know “dil me basta ho” ! lol 😀
    No seriously, Love it Maria. Every word rhymed and fitted with each other perfectly. It was a treat to read ^_^

    • randomlyabstract says:

      Hahahha. MashaAllah se theories tou dekhen apni. XD
      Faiz Ahmed Faiz farmaty haen ke:

      Notorious is love, while lying in the heart unspoken…
      Coming into expression on the lips, it’s a mystery.

      But maamla ye hae yahan ke lab pe aey tou ruswaai ho. 😛 Dil me rahey tou raaz sahee. Anywaaaay, thank youu so much, Sheen! 😀 I’m very glad you liked it. ^_^

  3. Arindam Saha says:

    Best… Seriously best… Aapko to pataa hi hai, jab koi kavita achchhi lagti hai to usme do chaar line jorr deta hoon… But ye waali padh ke itni perfect lagi ki isme kuchh add kiya to poem bigad jaayegi…

    And the closing lines… Jaan de doon aisi lines pe to… 🙂

  4. Syeda Maham says:

    That’s beautiful….it really is..

    But lately I often wonder if such a level of conformity is possible? or may be it is only an idealistic perception devouring poetic minds….

    • randomlyabstract says:

      See, that’s the thing about poetry. You can write what is, what is not, what never will be, or what you wish to see.
      In this one, for example, the theme isn’t just oneness. It is also about distances. The stars appear to be close, yet in real they’re distanced by millions of miles. The differently typed pages belong to the same book, but… they are differently typed! So the whole of it is contradictory, in a way. Not entirely, but yes.

  5. Pamela says:

    Maria this was a succour to my soul dear.
    Just thought it was a prose when it turned out to be a poetry.
    So enchanting and magical.
    I suppose like sonnet, ballad, will evolve your own genre some day.
    Well then, think about naming it “MyriadMaria” 🙂
    A Bliss!

      • Pamela says:

        Before you came, I had felt the bliss of writing.
        But after you, I have come to experience the joy of sharing my thoughts, being appreciated and being noticed.
        All thanks to u.

        • randomlyabstract says:

          Pamela! You’re too kind. ❤ I am blessed to know you. And mera waqai koi kamal nahi hae. It’s your fault you’re so good at writing things. 😀 Plus it was you who found me, so shouldn’t I thank instead? ^_^

          P.S. I had sent you an email earlier. About a week or two ago. Just wanted to know if things were fine, and I hope they are. =)

          • Pamela says:

            Hey I domehow had missed reading the precious mail.
            Without a stable internet connection, life is m7serable.
            Im accessing d net thru a 2g sim on my phone…
            So extremely sorry dear.
            You just moved me to tears..ur mail…
            Things r fine , but lik I said im waiting at a crucial juncture now.. 😉
            Will let you know soon. Keep praying fr me.
            Live you for all the l8ve you hav given me.♥♥♥

          • randomlyabstract says:

            Aw, that’s okay. Yes I understand, I was worried about it so I asked. I wish you the BEST. Stay blessed.. 🙂

            And I love you more!! =D ♥ Have great days ahead and yes you’re in my prayers. =)

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