Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.


ایک اکیلی لڑکی ہے
ایک اکیلی کوئل ہے

کبھی کوئل گُن گُن گاتی ہے
کبھی لڑکی روتی جاتی ہے

16 responses

  1. :/

    April 15, 2014 at 5:47 pm

    • That second expression! Tell me about it.😀

      April 15, 2014 at 5:49 pm

      • About the second expression : These lines have a double effect on a reader, or at least on this reader. The words flow smooth and give a serene affect, while the actual diction and idea is really sad. Hence the love and the exasperation, or the faint sadness.

        April 28, 2014 at 10:00 am

  2. deepbluesandseafoamgreens


    April 15, 2014 at 6:42 pm

  3. Deep. Sad. Devastating.

    April 15, 2014 at 7:11 pm

  4. 😦

    April 16, 2014 at 9:04 pm

  5. fahaad humayun

    Am I the only one, as always I might add, who think it doesn’t make any sense:/

    April 17, 2014 at 7:33 pm

    • Nahi aur bhi hongay, they just didn’t say. Not everybody can be Fahaad Humayun, after all. ^_^

      April 17, 2014 at 8:12 pm

      • fahaad humayun

        ah the sarcasm :’)

        April 17, 2014 at 8:15 pm

  6. پھر رم جھم ساون آتا ہے
    اور جھڑی سی اک لگ جاتی ہے

    پھر حولے حولے دھیرے سے
    اک مسکراہٹ اُن ہونٹوں پر آتی ہے

    Larkiyaan rootey hue achi nai lagti … aage he kon si woh hoor pariyaan hoti hain … !!! HAHAHAHA :p

    Wese to muje pata hai … ye nacheez si chaar lakirain … es Ammer khane mai jald he gum ho gye ge …Happy now !!!

    April 20, 2014 at 9:38 pm

    • Phir rim jhim sawan ata hae – aur jharri si ek lag jati hae<3
      بہت شکریہ، مانی! گم نہیں ہونگی یہ سطریں کبھی۔😀
      Yep, happy. Thank you for coming. ^_^

      April 20, 2014 at 10:03 pm

  7. Tayyeba


    April 28, 2014 at 7:54 pm

  8. Mai larki hoon. Aur rote huay quail ke geet sunke mujhe sukoon milta hai. Jaise wo mere liye gaa rahi ho. Shayad isi liye aur rona aata jaata hai.

    Bas yar It’s almost 2 am now and my back hurts cause Ive been sitting on one chair for hours reading parts of your heart. I’ve loved every bit and could go all night but abhi ke liye itna hi. Kehte hain achi cheezon ko dheeray dheeray khatam karna chahiye. Mujhe dil tou nahi chah raha lekin I have to go abhi baaki stalking weekend pe😛 Toodles!❤

    June 17, 2015 at 2:22 am

    • Maria, I can't tell you how much I loved your responses on all these posts. 17th June was a wonderful day. Thank you so much for all your time, your beautiful comments and thoughtful remarks. I feel deeply, deeply humbled, grateful. More than glad to have you here!🙂

      June 21, 2015 at 1:03 am

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