You were a colon
and semicolons you detested
I tried putting a comma there
like grammar lady suggested.
but our life, it seems, is an underscore
or an inverted question mark blotted
because whenever I ask for space
or try putting us back within a parenthesis,
you usually slash me―
This is not, however, how I had imagined
us to be. I always wanted a life smooth as tilde
a prime time together, never fearing bad weather
I wanted us to fight against negations,
but like a dagger kills relations
or a bullet, we died inside too…
It is a broken bar now, and it hurts
at the highest degree of pain.
Can we still back into space though,
or is it about time we put a full stop?
This is really fantastic, I love how you use the great punctuation references!
also,
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Oh, thank you so very much! ❤
This is outrageously ingenious Maria. Great job. 😀
Thank you, Ghalia! ❤ Glad you like it.
It means a lot coming from you.
Great way to express ur self. yes all our life we search for correct punctuation, but very few do good with it. stay happy
True.
At times, errors are unavoidable. But there are ‘few’ who actually know how to go well with them.
Thank you so much for your wonderful comments, Sarwat. Stay awesome! 🙂
mashaAllah I loved this!! Keep it up sis 😀
Thank you so much!! ❤ Stay blessed.
“Exclamation mark”…oh, and add a “Wow” in front of it.
All smiles. Thank you so much for your comment!
love the creativity you put into using this daily prompt. Very nicely done! Have a great day!
Many thanks! ♡
Loved this!
Thank you so much! 🙂
Clever! 🙂
Thank You, Ma’am. 🙂
Reading you with respite after a long time and as I knew it already, u never fail to surprise me. This one is a creative paradigm in itself, novel!
*speechless*
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