Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.


Write how your heart bleeds (1)


24 responses

  1. Excellent! Loved that ending!

    January 14, 2015 at 12:34 am

  2. u must be a magician or something, cuz what you have written here is so relateable to me… kudos

    January 14, 2015 at 2:33 am

    • 🙂
      “Take advantage of it now, while you are young, and suffer all you can, because these things don’t last your whole life.” Márquez.

      January 14, 2015 at 10:29 pm

  3. Maria I fell in love with this as soon as I started reading this. Its so relatable. The ending was just perfect!

    January 14, 2015 at 4:10 pm

  4. meenakshiwarrier

    Beautiful Maria! Please keep writing🙂

    January 14, 2015 at 9:35 pm

    • Thank you!🙂 I will… inshaAllah. I hope you’re doing well.

      January 14, 2015 at 10:34 pm

      • meenakshiwarrier

        I’m doing well! College is about to end so I’m making the most of the little time left😉

        January 14, 2015 at 11:24 pm

        • Ohh, nice. Have fun!

          January 14, 2015 at 11:49 pm

        • And if you don’t mind me asking, you’re studying what?

          January 14, 2015 at 11:51 pm

          • meenakshiwarrier

            I’m studying economics. Even I don’t know why I left literature for it😦

            January 15, 2015 at 1:35 am

          • Economics is a cool subject! And you can always find wonderful literary stuff of famous writers on and offline for your interest. So it’s all good, no? ^_^

            January 16, 2015 at 8:18 pm

          • meenakshiwarrier

            Hahaha! I like your optimism😉

            January 21, 2015 at 1:58 am

  5. BEAUTIFUL read= thanks so much for sharing it!

    January 17, 2015 at 10:03 pm

  6. “Write how everything reminds you of him”… you made me teary..almost..

    January 24, 2015 at 3:14 pm

  7. And yes, someday after sometime… “you cannot write any of that”..ever.

    January 24, 2015 at 3:16 pm

  8. rjl2727

    And what should I say, my friend? Only that I understand the questions you ask, though never know the answers.

    February 1, 2015 at 8:33 am

    • 🙂 Thank you for reading and for your comments, Bob! It means so much to me.

      February 4, 2015 at 12:49 am

  9. This is so motivational to someone like me, who was looking for things to write about after dealing with life’s struggles. Thank you!

    February 4, 2015 at 4:33 am

  10. Julie

    Beautiful, Maria!

    February 12, 2015 at 6:45 am

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