36 thoughts on “You haunt me.

  1. This is a great use of all the elements of the challenge. I also really like the half rhyme of ‘my body’ and ‘coffee’, it sounds really lovely when you read it out loud. The whole poem has a nice intense tone to it when you read it out loud actually! 🙂

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