Tread softly because you tread on my dreams.

Lamerick

Once upon a time, a silver doe

Came out of nowhere into the snow

To the pool it walked

Harry followed, shocked

Limerick ends. Next you’ll never know.

This in response to the the Writing 201 challenge which required us to write a limerick (9-9-5-5-9 syllables, a-a-b-b-a rhyme scheme) on ‘imperfect’ but guess the only thing imperfect is the poem itself, lels. Used enjambment. The theme, in case you can’t recall (or haven’t read), is a chapter from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows where the pretty thing comes to his rescue while at the forest.

The-Silver-Doe

23 responses

  1. Left us hanging!πŸ™‚

    October 9, 2015 at 1:15 am

  2. Admitted, for long away from blogging did I go
    What was the reason, I still don’t know
    I can say I was busy and didn’t have time
    But that’s an excuse, not worth a dime
    I tried to compose a limerick, how did it go?

    October 9, 2015 at 1:23 am

    • OMG it’s perfect! Mujhay ghantay lagay the sochnay me. :p Hello to you. Long time indeed.

      October 9, 2015 at 1:31 am

      • Maine bhi likha… maine bhi likha… padho padho…πŸ˜›

        October 9, 2015 at 1:35 am

        • Hindi me? :p “Routine” hi samajh aya abhi tk

          October 11, 2015 at 8:55 pm

          • Google translate to Urdu… not angrezi… jo sikhaayaa tha… sab bhool gayin…πŸ˜›

            October 11, 2015 at 8:58 pm

  3. Aah! Didn’t note the restriction on syllables

    October 9, 2015 at 1:26 am

  4. I like the cliffhanger endingπŸ™‚

    October 9, 2015 at 1:47 am

  5. Oh I know what’s next… Not!
    Good stuff there Maria. That brought up good old HP memories.

    October 9, 2015 at 5:57 am

  6. Great job! I love this one. The ending was great. I’m not too familiar with Harry Potter but I enjoyed the limerick on its own.

    October 9, 2015 at 6:37 am

    • Thank you so much! That means a whole lot. I find these tough but well, challenges are fun. One day (hopefully, soon) I will improve on the ‘rad’ one and show it to you.πŸ™‚

      October 9, 2015 at 7:53 pm

  7. Oh tinkerer is going to explode with joy because of your theme and poem,of course.πŸ˜„

    October 9, 2015 at 12:11 pm

  8. YAYAYA #TeamPotter4Life! :”””””””)
    HP is❀ :$

    Also, kudus to you for acing all dem intimidating poetry prompts!πŸ˜€

    October 10, 2015 at 4:47 am

    • Haha team potter YAAAAS.
      It is.πŸ™‚
      Thank you so much! xD

      October 14, 2015 at 5:08 am

  9. kudos* :S

    edit button needed.

    October 10, 2015 at 4:49 am

  10. Oh you finished the story before it started. Gandi.πŸ™‚

    October 13, 2015 at 12:48 am

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